A good sense of humor is an important for humans. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons and details to support your answer.
Every person is skilled in one domain or another. For instance, there are incredible dancers who are bad in dancing, or great singers who are unable to dance well. Every single skill is equally important to others. That said, the enjoyment of skills depend on how often the bearer is able to apply it. A sense of humor is one of the most amazing skills humans should have because it benefits them, help the people around them and releases stress.
First, humoristic people gain advantages from their talent. All over the world, people value having fun, which turns to the advantage of people with senses of humor. Michel Gohou who is a famous humorist from Ivory Coast makes his money thanks to his ability to be humorous. For instance, he hosts a prolific TV Show called Bienvenue au Gondwana that welcome thousands of people, thus, producing large amount of money to the hosts. A sense of humor is one key to success because it has the ability to be transformed in a career.
Second, one's sense of humor is beneficial to the person's large community. A funny man or woman contributes to enjoyable life experiences of his or her peers. For example, in my high school, I studied with a man called Domengo, an extremely humoristic man. Every time we had spent a bad day - a day we failed to every single quiz - Domengo would crack jokes in class and help us regain the positive energy needed to keep working in class. Because of his sense of humor, Domengo acted as a servant leader intended to serve the entire class. A good sense of humor helps the community to remain focused on important objectives.
Last, a good sense of humor releases stress. Some humorists are barely sad because their stress is released through seeing people around them laugh. Djassa-Djassa, who is the most well-known comic person in Goma, had stated that on his TV Show that one of the reasons of his consistent happiness is the fact that people laugh when they are in front of him, and that prevent him from being stress. Humans are energized when their surrounding offers a positive mood. Wherever humorists are, this positive energy exists. Humorists themselves as well as their audiences benefit from that energy and become free from stress.
In conclusion, a sense of humor is a vital quality in life because it serves the community, releases stress, and are the source of a fascinating career. Humorist barely suffer anxiety because they generate positive energy for themselves and others. People who have a great sense of humor are a blessing to others because they help them maintain their strength.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2146.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 447.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80089485459 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45700727261 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51677852349 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 683.1 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.1843158629 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.84 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.88 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.68 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 24.0 11.8709677419 202% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1323313771 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0452919319941 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530469649599 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0797482415479 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288298288919 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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