Dowsing
Both the passage and the lecture are discussing dowsing. The author of the passage presents the numerous benefits of dowsing, but the lecturer is extremely skeptical of all these claims.
The passage states that dowsing can be used to locate places to dig in order to find water. The professor disagrees with this statement and explains that finding underground water using dowsing is a result of pure luck. In fact, she says that the probability of finding water while digging with dowsing is the same as when people do not use it.
The author of the article says that the dowser can feel the energy of water vibrating at given frequencies. The lecturer casts doubts on this by stating that this idea defies the laws of physics. She claims that there is no evidence to explain these forces that the dowser detect. Research has been done with more sensitive elements - used to detect very weak signals - but the energy that the dowser detects could not be identified by those special devices.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 94, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e places to dig in order to find water. The professor disagrees with this statement...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 22.412803532 76% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 30.3222958057 73% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 826.0 1373.03311258 60% => OK
No of words: 171.0 270.72406181 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83040935673 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 4.04702891845 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34117604688 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 145.348785872 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619883040936 0.540411800872 115% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 419.366225166 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0301022451 49.2860985944 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7777777778 110.228320801 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 21.698381199 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06452816374 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15072425463 0.272083759551 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648939473176 0.0996497079465 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0920303533648 0.0662205650399 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0878765624839 0.162205337803 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12427622648 0.0443174109184 280% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.3589403974 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.8541721854 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.2367328918 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.42419426049 105% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 63.6247240618 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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