government should spend more money in support of arts than in support of atheletics such as state-sponsored Olympic teams.
Never does the contradiction between the investment towards arts and athletics fail to arouse people's attention in the modern society. It is widely accepted that the support of the arts can outweigh the suooprt of athletics, because arts can be an essencial part in a country's history and modern development. From my perspective, I disagree with the statement for the following reasons.
Admittedly, arts can be a crucial part in human society since it to some degree symbolizes a country's spirit. Many ancient attractions become increasingly a greater part in boosting the economies in many area. Besides, recent years can witness more and more students being admitted by a college through their elaborate art skills. Simply put, art do have these positive impacts on modern society and we could not deny them.
However, the reasons above could not sufficiently support the opinion that we should invest more money in arts areas than in athletic parts. One reason to back up the statement is that the support of athletics can lead to a trend to do exercises among residents. Support of the arts can to some degree cause a sedentary aulture while support in athletics can encourage people to lead a healthy life style.
In this way, support of athletics can be more plausible in terms of positive influences on people's health.
In addition, support of athletics can be a more environmental-friendly choice for government. Contaminant drafts and polluted paper can be easily accumulated in art work creating. Some chemical materials in these waste can be toxic and harmful to people's health. Contrary to it, the support of athletics has no such trouble to deal with the potential of the pollution of the environment. In that case, it is also less expensive to invest in sports fields account for its environmental-friendly character.
In conclusion, I do agree with the statement that we should spend more money on support of athletics than arts, since it has positive impacts on encouraging people to do exercises and environment.
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- Directions You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response Your response will be judged on the basis of the quality of your writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and their relationship to the reading passage Typicall 3
- TPO 54 The Salton Sea in California is actually a salty inland lake The level of salt in the lake s water what scientists call its salinity has been increasing steadily for years because the lake s water is evaporating faster than it is being replaced by 81
- TPO 15 integrated writing 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 200, Rule ID: MANY_NN
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun area seems to be countable; consider using: 'many areas'.
Suggestion: many areas
...eater part in boosting the economies in many area. Besides, recent years can witness more...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, so, while, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1710.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 334.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11976047904 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06347562888 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511976047904 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.088555288 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.588235294 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6470588235 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.82352941176 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238564278141 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835824948997 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763422173058 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142685085846 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063929640509 0.0645574589148 99% => OK
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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