Governments should provide universal healthcare.
Some people believe that governments should not provide universal healthcare because it will drive up the taxes and government expenditure will rise. However, I agree that government should provide universal healthcare. I will state two major reasons to explain my stance.
First, healthcare should not be a privilege but a right as everyone deserves to have access to healthcare. For instance, when I started my first job in one of the biggest, most expensive cities of the country I was not earning sufficient money to pay premiums or monthly payments for any health insurance plan. During that period of time, I was constantly struggling with breathing issues. I only googled my symptoms and looked for homemade remedies because I desperately wanted to avoid seeing a doctor. I avoided doctors not because I did not believe in medical science but to dodge those hefty medical bills, which I could not afford. Eventually, I had a better job and with that came health insurance, hence I was fortunate to seek a doctor’s care again. However, unfortunately, a lot of people are still struggling and they hesitate to go to doctors either to avoid medical bills or they cannot simply afford to have those expensive health or medical insurances.
Second, a large number of people strongly oppose universal healthcare by governments because they believe it will raise government expenditure or the government will be unable to afford it. In contrast, I believe that if the government can have the budget to spend billions of dollars to buy or build weapons then they can have money to provide healthcare to everyone. Most weapons are rarely used so instead of spending money preparing for battles a nation may never have to fight, it would be ideal to provide better healthcare to its citizens.
In conclusion it be said that it is a complex topic and people will find it difficult to find common ground. Some will oppose universal healthcare citing reasons such as higher taxes, more government spending. Nevertheless, I support universal healthcare because no one should ever have to worry about medical bills while significant amount of money is being spent to build weapons that will only harm the world.
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Nowadays, the inevitable…
Nowadays, the inevitable truth of the world is the dynamic grow up of the technology, according to this, the people living in modern society demand for the update system and appliances and convoluted living styles. Thus, the kind of plan and organize need to obtain to manipulate the latest things. In my perspective, it agrees that a person ought to possess the ability to plan and manage these, especially for youngster.
The first major requirement is to plan all the duties, responsibilities, and daily matters and the achievement cannot be derived from the scattered task. Thus, the juveniles who required the scheme with the target goal, and consequently, they should evaluate what is the priority for their life and education. For this reason, the young people can monitor themselves and obtain self-confidence and belief about their mission after planning. The more they complete with success, the higher the valuation of plan of action.
Besides, the triumph includes both the plan and the ability to organize. Hence, the youngster need to catch up the latest technology to arrange the tasks, and the modern life is with the full of amazing techniques like internet and educational applications. Moreover, the accomplishment depends on the skills to organize, without this, everything will not be systematical and the failure chances can be attained. Accordingly, the young person ought to have the knowledge about technology and apply to reach their destination. Drawing from the instance of my family, my little brother, who was in high school final year, he used about the plan and organize strategies. At the beginning of his study, he set his goals to become an engineer and focused on the study plans and used the internet and information on the websites to organize how he can achieve his objective. Finally, he won his dream and all of our family members are so proud for him.
To sum up, the reasons that mentioned above clearly stated that the young people need to access the modern complicate life by making the plan and organize things.
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... weapons that will only harm the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, second, so, still, then, while, as for, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1851.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 366.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05737704918 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76040808351 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51912568306 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3896734526 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.6875 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.125 5.45110844103 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358084952819 0.236089414692 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130735646684 0.076458572812 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.164613023637 0.0737576698707 223% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.267418416708 0.150856017488 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.16869578602 0.0645574589148 261% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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