Health is the most prominent issue in the life of a human. Some people claim that the government should provide the health facilities of civilians and the others disagree about that. From my point of view, it is an inevitable task that the government ought to manipulate.
To begin with, the world is distributed all of the pros and cons due to the habitants. Consequently, the people from all around the society relate from the different aspects like travel, business. For this reason, the authorities require to implement the public health sectors. For instance, the Covid-19, the pandemic infected millions of people all over the world and it destroyed human lives, the country's economy and transportation. Moreover, it also severely affected my country and over 1000 lives were lost between the third wave because of the lack of healthcare system which included the lack of oxygen, the shortage of pharmacies. The reason why the authorities ought to analyze the detailed procedures to provide nationwide health facilities.
Besides, if the government provides universal health topics like public insurance and free services, they may have the ability to increase longevity such as hygiene, lifestyle. Furthermore, the people should access the equality although they are poor. As an example, the civilians who have no insurance from the low economy countries who are facing the inequality and pricing transparency in health care system and loose their lives owing to that factors. As a nation, the government should conduct the every standard of nationalities to receive the affordable health services and focus on the scarcity of medicine sources, and then, provide expenditure for the public doctors and clinic system. As a result, the society can restore the development in variety of sectors and even the crime rate that commit owing to find expenses for health problems.
To conclude, I agree that the government is responsible for the people who live in their country due to the above factors because heath is the essential need for the human being.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, then, third, for instance, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1731.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 333.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1981981982 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74321324592 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546546546547 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 12.0 3.08781362007 389% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6729188905 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.4 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 5.45110844103 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211812885213 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620169226077 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758646417513 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120452674756 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705615987015 0.0645574589148 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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