Groups or organizations are important part of some people`s life. Why are groups or organizations are important to people? Use speciifc reasons and examples to explain your answer.
We live in society and communication with others benefits everyone. In my opinion, groups or organizations are important to people because they prevent people from loneliness.. There are a few reasons why I feel this way.
First of all, in a group people can find friends. Friends bring to our life colors and make it more fascinating. With friends we can share emotions and opinions on certain topics. For instance, I like to travel in a company of friends and share my emotions about astonished places we visit. This kind of discussions help me to express myself, and make the adventures more enjoyable. From the other hand, if there is nobody next to me to talk with at the time, the trip seems boring. To that end, traveling with friends makes my life interesting.
Secondly, people in a group can help to each other. Sometimes we face egregious situations in life, such as loosing people we love. In this case, it is crucial to have support of others. For example, when recently one of my colleague`s mother past away, the only thing, which helped him to deal with this terrible event, was conversations with people. It gave to the man psychological support and awareness that he is not alone. So, without others` support my colleague could fall to a tremendous depression.
Finally, people learn a myriad of things from each other. Others` experience can give to a person new knowledge, which he can use to improve his life. My own experience illustrates it very. When I just moved to the U.S. I barely could speak English and because of that could not find a job. I felt very lonely and joined a group of foreigners, who helped me with English. They gave me scores of advice of how to start spiking English in a limited period time. In fact, after one year of communication with them I improved my language dramatically and was hired by an employer. Therefore, without tips from the students in the group I would succeed so fast.
To sum it up, I feel that groups prevent people from loneliness. This is because they help people to find friends, provide psychological support, and give us tools to succeed. All things considered it is reasonable to assume that groups and organizations make our life better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i feel, in fact, kind of, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1851.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 387.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78294573643 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81018176765 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545219638243 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.994623655914 302% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.7199892715 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.5555555556 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3333333333 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25925925926 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21826675984 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061875964944 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824143394494 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15516021925 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0889054726692 0.0645574589148 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => The average readability is low. Need to improve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Try to use less pronouns (like 'It, I, They, We, You...') as the subject of a sentence.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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