Health condition is the way to influence the behavior of human being? Do you agree with this topic or not
No doubt, it is admitted that human being is the most appealing creatures in this universe. What I mean by this is that people easily feel the mental oppression when they deem that they are ill even if it is fever. That’s why, it is easily perceived that relation among the human being and health is congruent and most of the time to decipher the human being is quite inferred according to their health problem. In consideration of this view, I wholeheartedly believe the positive response of the above statement.
To embark on, every joyous moment of our life is understood by the symptoms of our health. If our health is full functioned and there are no hazards, in that moment, we especially enjoy those moments in an innumerable merriment which can’t be depicted in one a sentence. For instance, my friend has been shivering since 13th March and his condition is so feeble that he is in great trap. Just couple of days ago I saw his illness which is not so high but he is unable to rejoice himself. After all he might be recovered quite soon, his face seemed that he is the worst person in this world and already he has left all works of academic. Moreover, he lost to speak in an evasive way and invariably downtowns others. Especially his audacious behavior and valor in his speech is decimated.
In addition, the hardship of health hazard is the prime reason not to be associated with the whole world. Actually all astute public are in the same opinion of this condition that if anyone faces cancer, how will we pacify his mind. Eventually it is very tough to strengthen mind at that condition although we have all money which is very insufficient to tackle us. Suppose a man is attacked by blood cancer. No sooner had he heard the news than his psychology changed. Although all happiness are brought about in front of him, his mind will not blow. My nearest uncle died at 2013 by suffering of blood cancer. At that moment I felt how hardship he was tackling and above all tried to come back. As a result, most of time his faces were gloomy and did n’t share any news and views to others.That’s why such epidemic and tortuous disease spoil the psychology to behave others well.
Last but not least, if we look at the Nigeria, Somalia, what a scenario it is. It is really a heart-breaking scene which we can’t but tolerate. A magazine has published that Nigerian people don’t get sufficient food to meet up their malnutrition and vice-versa. Basically their health condition is not up to the mark as well. In effect they are very unsociable and very few can accommodate to the rest of the world.
To wrap it up, it is very cumbersome to provide the solution of this open-ended question. So although a few may oppose my purview it is very clear that we have to be up to date in this scenario. Only thorough planning can’t we keep us good , rather it is needed to be focused on the health condition to make life better
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, look, may, moreover, really, so, then, well, after all, for instance, i mean, in addition, no doubt, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 41.0 15.1003584229 272% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 74.0 43.0788530466 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2433.0 1977.66487455 123% => OK
No of words: 530.0 407.700716846 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59056603774 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79809637944 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65769555066 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 280.0 212.727598566 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528301886792 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 761.4 618.680645161 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3940065886 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8928571429 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.67857142857 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185964876565 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471354210451 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529503406443 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108118292759 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582695483777 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 86.8835125448 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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