It goes without saying that in today's sophisticated world we live in, where people try to have their own suitable job in their life, it comes as no surprise that using of all opportunities in our life and make right decisions for them is vital need. There are substantial numbers of people who are of the opinion that if an opportunity provides a secure job for people, they should take it right away rather than wait for satisfying job. I personally, concur with this idea. The rationale behind this thesis will be elaborated upon and exemplified in the ensuing paragraphs by focusing on the following reasons.
One imperative reason coming to mind at first is that it relates to financial aspect. As a matter of fact, people who have a secure job, they have more permanent economical situation in their life as they sure about their stable income per month which leads to different positive effects. To illustrate, imagine a man who had a secure job. He can spend his time for his interesting works such as art, music, having fun with his family, and so on. This relates to this fact that money is one the most important things in life and if they don't have any worry about it, they will be able to spend more time for the other works and improve his/her ability for another works.
The second reason which deserves some points here is that they can have more opportunities in their life. It goes without saying that obtaining work experience is one the most important factor for promoting in our work. In this regard, by choosing a secure job, people can gain more experience than those wait for a desirable work. In addition to promotion, they have more chances to enter to the highly level companies. For the sake of clarity, perhaps one first-hand experience can shed more light on the matter. My father worked as a civil engineer many years ago which it was his first job. After one 1-year work experience, he promoted as one of the top experts there. Finally, after 3 years of working, he accepted in Esri, which is one the top companies about civil engineering, and worked as chief expert in structural management part.
To sum up,despite the fact that there a plethora of opinion and contention surrounding the idea mentioned in the question, I personally agree with this statement as people should use the opportunities end to a secure job rather than waiting for a satisfying job based on financial aspects and having more opportunities in their life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['finally', 'first', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'in addition', 'such as', 'as a matter of fact', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.226694915254 0.229887763892 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.148305084746 0.158761421928 93% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0911016949153 0.0866891130778 105% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0317796610169 0.046263068375 69% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0720338983051 0.0685040099705 105% => OK
Prepositions: 0.158898305085 0.118717715034 134% => OK
Participles: 0.0402542372881 0.0351676179071 114% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.58172548811 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0254237288136 0.0309702414327 82% => OK
Particles: 0.0021186440678 0.00188951952338 112% => OK
Determiners: 0.0868644067797 0.0887237588012 98% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0169491525424 0.0209618222197 81% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0169491525424 0.0139019557991 122% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2467.0 2387.08602151 103% => OK
No of words: 431.0 408.028673835 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.72389791183 5.86048508987 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.48200974243 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.299303944316 0.338922669872 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.204176334107 0.251872472559 81% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.150812064965 0.174417080927 86% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.111368909513 0.112833075102 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58172548811 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517401392111 0.524397521467 99% => OK
Word variations: 58.8249763943 59.2087087015 99% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.9444444444 20.5533526081 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.189575223 48.84282405 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.055555556 120.699889404 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9444444444 20.5533526081 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.644075263715 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 44.3620778551 45.7405998639 97% => OK
Elegance: 1.68907563025 1.45489161554 116% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.416778079614 0.300154397459 139% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.101684672501 0.103427244359 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0847435310741 0.0752933317313 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.460306272491 0.497263757937 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.185761454348 0.151897553556 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145114960819 0.114077575197 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121978919238 0.0781384742642 156% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.35688534471 0.336927656856 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0280472825013 0.067059652881 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.299389045774 0.210909579961 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679980606439 0.0618886996521 110% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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