If you are required to give feedbacks about your classmates colleagues would you like to give positive comments or negative comments first

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If you are required to give feedbacks about your classmates/colleagues, would you like to give positive comments or negative comments first?

In today's progressive and competitive we live no one can turn a blind eye on the significance of the influence that people have on each other. When it come to whether it is better to give positive comment on others work or personalities at first or negive comment, there are different ideas. Some people believe that the first comments should be positive. On the other hand, there are some people who hold the idea that it's more influential to leave negative comment in advance. I think the first group carries the more weight, and these are my justifications.

First, being positive at first is essential to forge a secure relationship, which allows you to make negative comments later. To clarify, if you start with negative comments, it would cast a considerable doubt on your good intentions. They couldn't believe that you try to improve them, and probably they would become negligible to all of your sayings. It is nessessary to be positive to forge a safe relationship, and make people to believe your goal is to help them, and you are not trying to belittle them.

Second, giving positive comments will boost the person's self-steem, which make them more creative and, aware of their strong point. To shed light on this, there are so many people who is suffer from low self-steem. They even doesn't know about their positive features, and never experienced being aknowledge from their classmates, boss, or collegues. By doing so we can teem them with an awful lot energy that stem from a good emotion to themselves. I personally think, people already know their drawbacks, and it is the low energy and lack of self-steem prevent them from get rid of their unwanted qualities. Therefore, kindly appreciating them for their positive characteristics whould help them to become more successful than they were before.

Third, human being by their nature love to be appreciated, and just a few of them are open to being criticized. We have to spend a lot of time to realize whether the person is ready for hearing bad thing about his/ her function. Some people are touchy, and just take just a little amount of criticizing of their work as personal. Therefore, it is better to start with positive points, and through this time gain an understanding about the person's openness to negative comments.

By considering above-mentioned reasons, I think, if we want to other fall under our influence, we have to start with positive comments. Because by doing so, our bond will strengthen, the self-steem of the person will boost, and we gain enough knowledge about person, and sync in out comments with their character.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 152, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comes'?
Suggestion: comes
...that people have on each other. When it come to whether it is better to give positiv...
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Line 1, column 209, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
...t is better to give positive comment on others work or personalities at first or negiv...
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Line 3, column 241, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...ble doubt on your good intentions. They couldnt believe that you try to improve them, a...
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Line 5, column 188, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'suffered'.
Suggestion: suffered
...n this, there are so many people who is suffer from low self-steem. They even doesnt k...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...s suffer from low self-steem. They even doesnt know about their positive features, and...
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Line 7, column 440, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...is time gain an understanding about the persons openness to negative comments. By co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, then, therefore, third, i think, to start with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2182.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 444.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91441441441 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75947872449 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515765765766 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 666.9 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 12.0 1.86738351254 643% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.6295546517 48.9658058833 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.904761905 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.19047619048 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233743322783 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074881235396 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777510110869 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13153843951 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0920763937047 0.0645574589148 143% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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