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If you could ask a famous person one question, what would you ask? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

Essay topics: If you could ask a famous person one question, what would you ask? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

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When it comes to the issue asking one question of a famous person, surely; people have different idea about this matter. As far as I am concerned, my favorite athlete is Mohammad Ali Kelli, who was a famous boxer of all time, and I want to know answers several of my questions about his life.

First and the most important question is that I want to know how he found out that could be a best in boxing. According to his biography, he was discovered his talent of boxing through an odd twist of fate. At the age of 12, when his bike was stolen, he told a young police, Joe Marine, that he wanted to beat up thief. “Well, you better to learn how to fight before you start challenging people” Martin reportedly told him. After this event, Martin trained young boxer, and soon he was being a great athlete in this sport. My question of him is that whether a small event can change our life direction considerably, or his biography is nothing but a story.

A further question I have is that how he decided to change religious, while it may affect his reputation negatively. As we all know, he announced his decision for changing their religious from Christine to Islam that American people have not a suitable imagine of Muslims. They had thought that Islam is nothing but violence. I want to know why take this adventure decision, which could decrease his fame. Also, I want to know, whether his efforts leaded American people to change their opinion about the Muslims or not.

Apart from question I made above, I want to know why he decide to avoid of taking part in the Vietnam War. As we all know, we are living in the violence-rich environment, and every day we have witnessing a war is initiated in a corner of the world. In this situation, famous people should use of their reputation to convince public opinion and politicians to stop the war, while all of them are passive in this matter. However, when Mohammad Ali was in the acme of the boxing achievement, he refuted to serve in military service and going to the Vietnam War. This decision has numerous negative on his futures, because he was banned to participate in boxing matches. It was a great question that why he took this significant decision, which could destroy his life, while today’s famous people are not brave to sacrifice their reputation for expanding peace.

In conclusion, I think that Mohammad Ali Kellie had a mystery life, and I like to find out many of my unanswered questions about his biography, and why he decided to change his religious or do not participate to the Vietnam war.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 294, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...several of my questions about his life. First and the most important question is...
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Line 3, column 93, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
... to know how he found out that could be a best in boxing. According to his biogra...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eir opinion about the Muslims or not. Apart from question I made above, I want...
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Line 7, column 57, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'decides'.
Suggestion: decides
...ion I made above, I want to know why he decide to avoid of taking part in the Vietnam ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'apart from', 'i think', 'in conclusion']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.206896551724 0.229887763892 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.180076628352 0.158761421928 113% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0632183908046 0.0866891130778 73% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0287356321839 0.046263068375 62% => OK
Pronouns: 0.109195402299 0.0685040099705 159% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.105363984674 0.118717715034 89% => OK
Participles: 0.0325670498084 0.0351676179071 93% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.60967735152 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.044061302682 0.0309702414327 142% => OK
Particles: 0.00574712643678 0.00188951952338 304% => OK
Determiners: 0.0766283524904 0.0887237588012 86% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0114942528736 0.0209618222197 55% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0268199233716 0.0139019557991 193% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2593.0 2387.08602151 109% => OK
No of words: 460.0 408.028673835 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63695652174 5.86048508987 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6311565067 4.48200974243 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.319565217391 0.338922669872 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.228260869565 0.251872472559 91% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.15 0.174417080927 86% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.095652173913 0.112833075102 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60967735152 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486956521739 0.524397521467 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 55.250393331 59.2087087015 93% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5533526081 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9465580495 48.84282405 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.65 120.699889404 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.5533526081 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 0.644075263715 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 45.8260869565 45.7405998639 100% => OK
Elegance: 1.0843373494 1.45489161554 75% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13935535464 0.300154397459 46% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.115469598701 0.103427244359 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0509649928223 0.0752933317313 68% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.521800256245 0.497263757937 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.162094866033 0.151897553556 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582282112915 0.114077575197 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393877185962 0.0781384742642 50% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.333434585623 0.336927656856 99% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0480025312551 0.067059652881 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0961024619488 0.210909579961 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0139356273017 0.0618886996521 23% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.86379928315 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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