Sometimes, most people think that if there is a time machine, what time should I go? I always imagine this. If I could go back to some time and place in the past, I would go back to four years ago when I was fourteen years old. I have three reasons for this.
First, that time was the happiest in my life. When I go to my first middle school, I can feel I have a new life, and a new start. At that time, I met many funny friends. Also, I had two best friends who went to Korea now, and were close to me in church. We always played together after church. Therefore, even now, the time I spent with them is still vividly memorable. Moreover, even when I went to school, there were so many fun friends, so going to school every day was very fun and life was just happy. Therefore, I want to go back and enjoy it again.
Second, if I go back to that time, I want to live more systematically. My dream is to become a doctor, so I have to do well in all tests and take various tests. If I could go back, I think I will study English and math more in advance from that time. Also, since then, I want to take care of my physical strength and I want to endure sleepiness and study more now.
Last, I want to grow taller. I was not tall when I was in middle school. I did not try because I slept late every day and did not exercise properly. Therefore, I regret that time. If I go back to that time, I would drink milk, jump rope, and sleep really early.
This is why I want to go back to four years ago. The reality is that I have had regrets in the past and I can not go back even if I want to, so I should enjoy my life now and live without regrets.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, really, second, so, still, then, therefore, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1977.66487455 66% => OK
No of words: 337.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 3.89317507418 4.8611393121 80% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.09543878555 2.67179642975 78% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477744807122 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 418.5 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.51630824373 79% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5608692917 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.0434782609 100.406767564 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.652173913 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.65217391304 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32889215921 0.236089414692 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0965479593081 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113773519916 0.0737576698707 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208754830181 0.150856017488 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100085946291 0.0645574589148 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.2 11.7677419355 36% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 91.11 58.1214874552 157% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 10.1575268817 39% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 4.69 10.9000537634 43% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.74 8.01818996416 72% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 86.8835125448 35% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, really, second, so, still, then, therefore, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1977.66487455 66% => OK
No of words: 337.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 3.89317507418 4.8611393121 80% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.09543878555 2.67179642975 78% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477744807122 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 418.5 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.51630824373 79% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5608692917 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.0434782609 100.406767564 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.652173913 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.65217391304 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32889215921 0.236089414692 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0965479593081 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113773519916 0.0737576698707 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208754830181 0.150856017488 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100085946291 0.0645574589148 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.2 11.7677419355 36% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 91.11 58.1214874552 157% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 10.1575268817 39% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 4.69 10.9000537634 43% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.74 8.01818996416 72% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 86.8835125448 35% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.