Nowadays, many people want to have a good position or great score in their society. Therefore, many people consider what is the best way to improve their performance. I think participating more actively is better than doing more extra work. I will tell you three reasons to support my opinion.
First, no one will appreciate the extra work. It is not easy to pay attention to each person because there are many people in both the company and the school. That is why working more does not make you more visible. Rather, they are not praising you for doing that much, but after you do not work that much, people will be strange at you. For example, I did more at the team work, but the teacher just gave the same points as others.
Second, if you participate more actively, people can remember you and will be outstanding. In the conference, you give some creative idea or solution, friends or colleagues will think you are the person who is vital in their team. In particular, in the company, it can be remembered as a more irreplaceable person, so you can work long and even go to a high position. For instance, my father said that these days in the company, it is necessary that there are many creative people.
Last, you can show off a lot of things by actively participating. When you join a team enthusiastically, you can show leadership, passion, and sincerity. Rather than doing a lot of work alone, you have to show how hard you work when there are many people to understand.
This is why I think participating in a work passionately is better than doing extra tasks.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, i think, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 52.1666666667 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1314.0 1977.66487455 66% => OK
No of words: 283.0 407.700716846 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64310954064 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68223251452 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52296819788 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.4634705479 48.9658058833 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.2941176471 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6470588235 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52941176471 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337317861512 0.236089414692 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127450143173 0.076458572812 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106307237883 0.0737576698707 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205495455318 0.150856017488 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415271425327 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 86.8835125448 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, i think, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 52.1666666667 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1314.0 1977.66487455 66% => OK
No of words: 283.0 407.700716846 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64310954064 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68223251452 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52296819788 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.4634705479 48.9658058833 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.2941176471 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6470588235 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52941176471 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337317861512 0.236089414692 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127450143173 0.076458572812 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106307237883 0.0737576698707 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205495455318 0.150856017488 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415271425327 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 86.8835125448 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.