Imagine that you plan to donate money to charity to help people in need. If you could give money to only one type of
a charitable organization, which one of the following would you choose and why?
- An organization that provides food and housing to people in need
- An organization that gives people money to start their own small business
- An organization that provides medical care to people in need.
Nowadays, charities play a great role in the progression of each society by donating money and other kinds of donation. In my opinion, if I could give money to an organization, I would prefer to provide fodd and housing to people who do not have them. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore them in the following paragraphs.
First of all, providing food and a place to live for people who do not have them make our community a better place to live. As a matter of fact, if they do not have food and house, they have to steal money or food, and what is worse is that they sleep in streets during nights, all of which make the cities and towns an unsafe and terrible place. In addition, if this problem is not solved asap, the crime rate will be increased which means they will be a threat for other people living in the same city with them. An example will illustrate this viewpoint much better. When I was a kid, I lived in city where there were a lot of homeless and hungry people. For this, I was mugged by these people several times when I was returning home after school. Based on that, my father decided to leave this city to another city with better situation. Therefore, had I not mugged at that time, my father would have not left the city I was born. For this, donating money to institutes which help these people enable us to live a better place
Furthermore, it is established beyond doubt that on the one hand some people believe that having a great job would be a better idea because by having job they would be able to buy food and rent a flat at least, yet on the other hand, others believe that how they can find a job when they do not have money for food and house. I firmly agree with the latter view point, for I believe that the more the more due to the fact that the more people have what we have known as a basic living standard such as house and food, the better they are able to make a plan for their life to find a decent job. By way of illustration, a recent study conducted by Tarbiat Modares University reveals that the high percentage of homeless people who could find their ways are the ones who could meet their basic needs at the first stage and then they were encouraged to find a decent job.
To wrap it up, according to the above-aforementioned reasons, on soon realizes donating money to people who need house and food would bring more several lucrative consequences inasmuch as in the first place, the cities become a better place to live by mitigating crime rate, and in the second place, they have the chance to go forward to find a job after meeting basic needs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 389, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'the more'.
Suggestion: the more
...e latter view point, for I believe that the more the more due to the fact that the more people ha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, second, so, then, therefore, at least, i feel, in addition, such as, as a matter of fact, first of all, in my opinion, in the first place, in the second place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.0286738351 199% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2136.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 494.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.32388663968 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71445763274 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31123387592 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.453441295547 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 678.6 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.1344086022 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.971390219 48.9658058833 225% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 142.4 100.406767564 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.9333333333 20.6045352989 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.4 5.45110844103 246% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188239154633 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700321044197 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575037520412 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138729351182 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454742943813 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 11.7677419355 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.37 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.0537634409 147% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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