it is better for student to turn their teacher when they have problem that their friends
To begin with, teachers are an experienced person, because they are teaching for a long time. In fact, students are able to depend on teacher's knowledge and learn better what involve his/her mind. Although it is a bit difficult to find a teacher when you have problems because they are not available, what I am certain is that they are familiar with the probable problems of students and give them useful advice. An example will illustrate this viewpoint much better. There was a time that I had a problem in a math course. Then, I went to my teacher's office, when I told him my problem, he started laughing and said me why all students have the same problem. As a result of being familiar with the common problem of students, he was able to solve my problem easily. For this reason, I strongly believe that teacher is more skillful and reliable in order to solve students' problems.
Secondly, time is a really important and precious thing that we have in our lives. As a matter of fact, if we have a problem, teachers are able to assist us quickly. In fact, it is feasible that other students have the same problem, and could not help us. Under this circumstances, we waste a great deal of our time without solving our problem. In addition, when two students speak each other, they may forget the problem and talk about other things, which is not important, while if they turn their teacher, they just discuss the problem. For example, when I was a student, I had a part-time job at university campus magazine as a reporter. As I remember, one time, I interviewed professor Nejati, who is a well-known psychologist in my country. He told me that a high percentage of student who turns each other in order to solve a problem cannot solve it or spend their time on another thing. Also, he told me that; therefore, schools forced students to turn their teacher when they have a problem. For this reason, the more students refer their teacher when they have a problem, the more they can save their time and become a success in their course.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 135, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teachers'' or 'teacher's'?
Suggestion: teachers'; teacher's
...In fact, students are able to depend on teachers knowledge and learn better what involve...
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Line 1, column 164, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
... depend on teachers knowledge and learn better what involve his/her mind. Although it ...
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Line 1, column 613, Rule ID: SAY_TELL[2]
Message: 'Say' cannot be followed by a direct personal object. Did you mean 'told'?
Suggestion: told
...him my problem, he started laughing and said me why all students have the same probl...
^^^^
Line 2, column 263, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...e problem, and could not help us. Under this circumstances, we waste a great deal of...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, while, another thing, for example, in addition, in fact, as a matter of fact, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 366.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57103825137 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50678109271 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494535519126 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 514.8 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.51792114695 284% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4624997906 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9444444444 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.55555555556 5.45110844103 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.527439001772 0.236089414692 223% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166656099319 0.076458572812 218% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137725099495 0.0737576698707 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.415207411176 0.150856017488 275% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.089481573688 0.0645574589148 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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