To improve the quality of education universities should spend more money on salaries for university professors

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To improve the quality of education, universities should spend more money on salaries for university professors.

Quality of an education that studednt receive and the professors inculcate by betowing to students depend upon several aspects of university life. In real life people can see several ways to improve education quality like by providing high salary to professors amongst many, however I do not agree with those stake-holders or university administration who keep this way of increasing salary due to numerous reasons. Few of those reasons are mentioned below.

For the first reason, the fund of an univerity is not always a strong logic which are meant for satiating professors with salary. We all know that in every cases money is not a panacea or a mediccatin of core problem. We also know that ubiquitous corrruption is burgeoning day by day and it has rendered society to delapidate its status. For example, in case of my country where there are relatively few research activities conducts even in PhD program, the increment of profssor's salary last year had significant injurious effect on university education system. Professors started taking leaves, making no appearance and no attendance at college. And after several months student union collectively published a notice admonishing the administration to revert the decision back. So what we can analyse from this situation is we must not focus only on one pervasively negative aspect with intention to improve academics. Isn't the management committe contemplate over the topic of providing salary just to increase the quality of education system?

For the second reason, universities must not squander their liquid resource in frivolous manner, as the sole salary can not guarantee an exquisite and majestic education system. The nearby society or the whole country will be benefitted with ne technology if the money they have is utilized in research purposes. For instance, trivial amount of research budgets was allocated in our country last year increasing the professors salary at the same time. Students pursuing their post graduate program as well as PhD program were not able to find research inputs like master mixes, markers and primers for PCR. The finding of such researches is going to be fruitful for the university though, administration didn't provided fund for research individual; they were compelled to buy such expensive chemicals by their own money. Isn't it a contentious matter for the university and society.
However, in few instance the salary could be a motivation to the the professor if salary is low observing the expensive country market.
In sum, in order to have a tremensous positive effect in academics and increasing education system of the country the university must not allocate most of it fund for providing salary to professors,

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, well, for example, for instance, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2296.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 437.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25400457666 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88631747453 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556064073227 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 751.5 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7259604568 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.842105263 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26315789474 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355168179439 0.236089414692 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101947060202 0.076458572812 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759472921147 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200168531075 0.150856017488 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518618150313 0.0645574589148 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 58.1214874552 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 10.9000537634 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 86.8835125448 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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