It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in the big city. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in the big city. Do you agree or disagree?

It goes without saying that in such a sophisticated world a plethora of people bend over backwards to live in a place where they feel comfort. It is undeniable that the place where people live has paramount and outstanding effects on their lives. Bearing this fact in mind a question that is a matter of debate a controversial one is whether children can benefits from grow up in the countryside or big town. Agreement is yet to be reached on this issue; however, to the extent that my personal perspective is concerned, children will be provided with myriads of facilities in big city, which is not available in countryside. In the following paragraph, I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons.

One compelling reason, lending credence to the stance taken above is that children are the pillars of every country in all corners of the globe. They need to be well-sufficient in order to face trials and tribulations. Scientifically speaking, although living in countryside may have some advantages such as less inflation or quit environment, children in a big city are more likely to achieve their dreams. For example, vast majorities of prominent universities and schools are located in the big cities that not only can provide fertile ground for children to reach tertiary education but also provide them latest resources in various realms. Delving further into the issue, reveal that live in a big city can revolutionize children's' life. In fact, hardly ever can children progress without any upgrade facilities. A noteworthy refreshingly intelligible statistic revealed by recent social research in our country; show that crowds of children who lived in a big city reached their pinnacle of their life, in which they have succeed in their education and career.

Another reason that is equally important if not more is that children should learn how to live independently and how to interact with different people from various level of society. Broadly speaking, nowadays life has difficulties, which may children confront many obstacles. Indeed, a big city can provide an opportunity for children to overcome those obstacles and learn how should handle problems individually. To put it in other word, social interaction and living autonomously play a significant role in life of every human being. Additionally, not until children live in a big city can they be mature enough. However, what I alluded to above cannot be overgeneralized to all contexts. Alongside with the innumerable benefits it has, indisputably, live in countryside is healthier rather than live in a big city because of high level of pollution and different diseases. Nevertheless, it does not make those preceding benefits pale.

To wrap it up, live in a big city or out of bustling city has its own benefits and drawbacks. Contemplating all the aforementioned reasons one soon realize that big city will provide an opportunity for children to access vast majorities of facilities such as the best universities. In addition, children will learn how to enhance their social activities and live independently. I highly suggest that children should spend their precious time living in big city due to the fact that big city can revolutionized their lives

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: them the latest
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Message: Use past participle here: 'succeeded'.
Suggestion: succeeded
...nacle of their life, in which they have succeed in their education and career. Anoth...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'well', 'broadly speaking', 'for example', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'such as']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.228621291449 0.229887763892 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.151832460733 0.158761421928 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.104712041885 0.0866891130778 121% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0593368237347 0.046263068375 128% => OK
Pronouns: 0.043630017452 0.0685040099705 64% => OK
Prepositions: 0.13612565445 0.118717715034 115% => OK
Participles: 0.0331588132635 0.0351676179071 94% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.04724640579 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0314136125654 0.0309702414327 101% => OK
Particles: 0.00349040139616 0.00188951952338 185% => OK
Determiners: 0.0732984293194 0.0887237588012 83% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0296684118674 0.0209618222197 142% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.022687609075 0.0139019557991 163% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3237.0 2387.08602151 136% => OK
No of words: 525.0 408.028673835 129% => OK
Chars per words: 6.16571428571 5.86048508987 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78673985869 4.48200974243 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.375238095238 0.338922669872 111% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.302857142857 0.251872472559 120% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.224761904762 0.174417080927 129% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.140952380952 0.112833075102 125% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04724640579 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 267.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508571428571 0.524397521467 97% => OK
Word variations: 61.0981390026 59.2087087015 103% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6684587814 116% => OK
Sentence length: 21.875 20.5533526081 106% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7798624801 48.84282405 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.875 120.699889404 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 20.5533526081 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.541666666667 0.644075263715 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 52.1607142857 45.7405998639 114% => OK
Elegance: 1.56164383562 1.45489161554 107% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.46885906216 0.300154397459 156% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0858895531715 0.103427244359 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.06153185586 0.0752933317313 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.45816508149 0.497263757937 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.129881300062 0.151897553556 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170379673614 0.114077575197 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796359359666 0.0781384742642 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.463760849653 0.336927656856 138% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0165826141906 0.067059652881 25% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.359905198618 0.210909579961 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044449894605 0.0618886996521 72% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8870967742 151% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 17.0 8.42114695341 202% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 22.0 13.6433691756 161% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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