It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city Do you agree or disagree Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay
Children are the father of the nation, so their nourishments, growing in a suitable environment is the prophetic sign of any country’s future and it is also very important for our lives. The surroundings or milieu where, children are growing is playing a key role for their future destination, prosperity. According to the given prompt, children to grow better in rural areas or urban areas, some agree with this one side, others would disagree with this. In my view, children growing in rural areas is beneficial for the following two important reason.
The main reason is that, the milieu, where children are growing is very important for cultural protector. As the child of today will carry our beliefs, customs, and norm of tomorrow. If they are failed to hold these crystal belief, then the society, country, specific groups believe will be fall in danger. For example, in Madaripur, a city of Bangladesh, where once people are living under poverty line and they were devoid from modern technology and foreign culture. For this reason, on that time, the children in the area were very conscious of their areas norm and they were engaged very much of their specific functions, ceremony. As the affective nature of modern technology and development has occurred in this area, they are now completely detached from their pristine belief and they are now indulged themselves in the flood of foreign culture and our own customs is in endanger. As you can see, the modernity causes aggressive impacts on the pristine nature of rural areas and to protect rural areas and also their customs is good for children own savings of norm.
Another reason is that, if the children are expose rural areas, then they are getting better chance to immersed themselves to develop their morality and they have get better chance to hold the country’s originality and also it is one of the best way for historical leadership development. As leaders are not born, they are grow because of their respective environments and the peoples their surrounding impacts much on their mental development. For instance, in Rajsahi, a city of Bangladesh, where born the country’s greatest leader, Sheikh Mujibur Rahman and he had better chance to grow. The rural environment of Rajsahi city and many leaders on that time influenced much on Shiekh Mujibur Rahman. When he was going to school, the serene nature of the environment impacted him. And various procession, meetings specifically political shade a light to indulge him for future endeavor on political and moral areas. After that, he was engaged himself for vanishing societal disparity, marched many time in a peaceful way to develop the poor and improvident lives. This experience taught me that, if you had a chance to grow a serene and politically rifts environment, then later life, you would have better chance to grow as an influential leader.
In sum, though some oppose the statement children growing in a rural environment is an excellent chance for children to hold future leadership and country’s development. This help not only to protect culture but also it is a better chance to develop their morality and works for underprivileged people. Hence, it should be ensure that, children are growing in a rural environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, then, for example, for instance, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 15.1003584229 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2740.0 1977.66487455 139% => OK
No of words: 540.0 407.700716846 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07407407407 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82057051367 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72395006894 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.455555555556 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 860.4 618.680645161 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 10.0 3.51792114695 284% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8632180686 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.545454545 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5454545455 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.13636363636 5.45110844103 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22894785817 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769044038989 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448244070157 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160615892955 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270471573343 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 11.7677419355 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 86.8835125448 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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