Education, degree and knowledge are one of the first questions for every employee. Education plays an inevitable role in our future jobs and salaries. Different jobs require different level of specialization and experience and selecting a job as our future occupation is a personal choice and people with different priorities choose different jobs with different prestige.
It happens a lot around us that we hear that a famous company looks for a specialist and an adept person to hire with a high salary. These job positions can be only fulfilled by people who have dedicated their life to a particular field. For instance, if a company looks for a lawyer they don’t care or it is no need for someone that Is also good in mathematics. As we all know being an expert in a field requires lots of energy, dedication and time for gaining experience which isn’t easy and it may frequently exclude us from learning about other subject. Although, it is absurd to claim that anyone who is specialized in one subject has no information about other fields because most of them are connected to each other and sometimes in order to be best in our jobs we find ourselves searching in other areas.
On the other hand, having broad spectrum although expensive, hard to handle and mostly are about jobs with low salary (part time jobs with no restriction for specialty) has benefits as well. Multi task people are like treasures for some jobs and sometimes it is their aptitude for being multi task brings them the opportunity to fit particular positions that not everyone can. For instance, the ability to socialize with people with variety of majors and fitting the world and the atmosphere around is a key role for a business manager. Furthermore, having knowledge and ability to handle different jobs looks legitimate and can be a guarantee to a person’s future with the depression predominant in countries and worsening conditions.
Ultimately personally talking, I hold this belief that as a teenager people should look into different fields so that they can choose their future way with eyes wide open because imagine wanting to change your field of study or occupation in your late 30s! I simply like to read books and essays about varieties of subjects and gain information superficially about them but this is just a habit of me in my leisure times. I strongly believe that there is nothing significant in obtaining power into all accounts. It is an indispensable fact that more knowledge and information a person has about his/her major the more his/her decisions are rational and more success follows.
In conclusion I may say that free will, talents, varieties of interests and conditions that people are living in can be the prior reasons that someone chooses either be a professional or not.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: part-time
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... are rational and more success follows. In conclusion I may say that free will, ...
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Suggestion:
...hooses either be a professional or not.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, may, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2340.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 473.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94714587738 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66353547975 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7977679672 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520084566596 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 751.5 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.050456085 48.9658058833 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.25 100.406767564 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5625 20.6045352989 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0926594557541 0.236089414692 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0319998890675 0.076458572812 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357740937727 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0457601020299 0.150856017488 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272432033811 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 11.7677419355 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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