Is it better to spend your money immediately when you earn it on things that can bring instant pleasure, or is it better to invest or save for some time in the future?
Spending money is always one of the most controversial issues to people. Some believe that it is better to put aside money and invest later while others prefer to spend it immediately for instant gratification. In my opinion, I would choose to save money for the future because of the following reasons.
First of all, people cannot make sure that they will have enough money for everything, as it is possible for unexpected situations to happen to their life. Nothing is certain; however, people tend to take the stability for granted. For instance, a sickness can come to us at any time and we need an amount of money for medicines or treatments; therefore, if we do not have any savings, this will be a tough situation. It does not only create troubles for ourselves but also stresses our loved ones out. Another example is in this unpredictable economy, people never know if their career is secured. If they do not actively save a portion of their income, once their employers go bankrupt and are forced to fire them, they will be in a very difficult position.
Second, putting money aside gives people opportunities to pursue many other things such as their hobbies or taking courses to advance their skills. To some people, traveling is their interest and it is quite an expensive hobby so a sum of savings will satisfy them greatly. For example, a lot of young people now have part-time jobs apart from their full-time ones; they do not use up their incomes but save it for a trip. Therefore, they have been to several countries at their young age. Other people make use of the money by enrolling in an advanced course to acquire most up-to-date knowledge and improve their skills, which are needed for them to be promoted in career.
In conclusion, spending money wisely will make our life easier: it enables us to successfully face the emergencies and afford our hobbies and goals. That would outweigh the instant gratification we get from using money immediately.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 341.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8211143695 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62879631857 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577712609971 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.587275023 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.75 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3125 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4375 5.45110844103 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218743147456 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756601280118 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744119935764 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154391748081 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104013699608 0.0645574589148 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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