Some job-seekers contend that stability counts the most when they enter the workforce while others give priority to material gain that comes with the job. I, however, think this issue should be analyzed case by case.
First off, if it is the young people that we are talking about, a high salary is definitely what they should be going for even it can be a job that's easy to lose. It is because the youth tend to be more adaptive to new surroundings and more willing to accept challenges. In this case, even this highly profitable job falls short of stability, it is never too hard for the young to start over and find another livelihood somewhere else. As long as they can acquire certain skills during their previous occupation, this life experience is itself worthwhile already. Not to mention there is a high salary that comes along. Young people are quite in need of accumulating wealth so as to pave the way for future abundance. As known to all, the early years of their adulthood offers a great opportunity for the young to learn about the essence of diligence and frugality. I've once heard about a story that can be a good case in point. It is about the owner of the biggest car wash chain in China. He used to be a car salesman in his 20s. It was a golden age for mobile business in the end of last century. This young man was really good at dealing with people and worked harder than any other employees, so it wasn't long before he won a good reputation of good service and earned quite a fortune. While a friend of his received stable but limited income in government service, he lived on commission and it could sometimes even double what his friend earned. Later in his life he lost the job due to the bad economy, but at that time he already acquired enough funds to start his own car wash company. So it seems clear that a less stable but high-paying job can benefit the young people to a larger extent.
On the other hand, if it is the older generation that we've now turned to, the optimal choice is the other way around. As for the senior or the middle-aged, they normally have a family to support or some health problems to attend to. They wouldn't have that kind of stamina to try out other job options. For them, sustainability is the first factor that determines their quality of life. My dad is a tenured college professor. He receives a modest paycheck but he enjoys his daily routine of lecturing all day without the slightest fear of losing his job one day. I was raised in a happy family thanks to my dad being the bread-winner for all these years. We feel safe because the welfare is guaranteed with such job.If my dad had chosen another more profitable but unstable job, we would have had to worry how to get by in case of an economic recession.
To sum up, the ideal job type varies according to different age groups.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'really', 'so', 'while', 'as for', 'as to', 'kind of', 'talking about', 'to sum up', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.204585537919 0.229887763892 89% => OK
Verbs: 0.155202821869 0.158761421928 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.109347442681 0.0866891130778 126% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0564373897707 0.046263068375 122% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0740740740741 0.0685040099705 108% => OK
Prepositions: 0.116402116402 0.118717715034 98% => OK
Participles: 0.0299823633157 0.0351676179071 85% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.40238600972 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Infinitives: 0.042328042328 0.0309702414327 137% => OK
Particles: 0.00352733686067 0.00188951952338 187% => OK
Determiners: 0.10582010582 0.0887237588012 119% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0141093474427 0.0209618222197 67% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0123456790123 0.0139019557991 89% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2855.0 2387.08602151 120% => OK
No of words: 524.0 408.028673835 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44847328244 5.86048508987 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7844588288 4.48200974243 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.278625954198 0.338922669872 82% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.175572519084 0.251872472559 70% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.11641221374 0.174417080927 67% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0725190839695 0.112833075102 64% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40238600972 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 288.0 212.727598566 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549618320611 0.524397521467 105% => OK
Word variations: 68.5872675005 59.2087087015 116% => OK
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6684587814 126% => OK
Sentence length: 20.1538461538 20.5533526081 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6989117217 48.84282405 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.807692308 120.699889404 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.5533526081 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.644075263715 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.54480286738 144% => OK
Readability: 37.7110980622 45.7405998639 82% => OK
Elegance: 1.22839506173 1.45489161554 84% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29637889754 0.300154397459 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0862662516802 0.103427244359 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0500031075424 0.0752933317313 66% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.424796792579 0.497263757937 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.16787387441 0.151897553556 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107365919313 0.114077575197 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718193602396 0.0781384742642 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.331871262474 0.336927656856 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.115370732192 0.067059652881 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208590318656 0.210909579961 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528525167306 0.0618886996521 85% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8870967742 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.91756272401 163% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.6433691756 139% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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