“Is it more effective for students to work as a group than on their own?” This is a most basic and most often-asked question about the way of study. To cut to my chase, the answer is “definitely yes.”
First off, group study enables one to draw on other’s strength and make up for weakness. Everyone has his/her own expert field which may be what others are not good at. So, to learn from one another will quickly help handle some tricky problems that one can hardly deal with. As a sophomore in my university, I’ve once bumped up against a very opaque mathematic problem, which really cost me almost half a day to think about it and yet had no solution. Suddenly, I realized three classmates of mine were studying in library, without hesitation, I decided to join in their group. Guess what? They quickly gave me three possible formulas to better apply to this question and help me understand the function of each formula. With their instructions, tackling this problem became easier and I figured out this problem just in a few minutes.
What’s more, it offers you an opportunity to stick with your plan. That is to say, with other’s supervision, you can better focus on your plan without easily being distracted by other things like playing a computer game, watching a fantastic movie or browsing some entertainment news. It actually enhances your self-discipline so you can stand a better chance to hold on to your plan instead of giving it up halfway. If you are studying alone when you find something attracts you, chances are that you will easily put what you are doing behind you and turn to enjoy doing another. As a result, you may not finish a single sentence after three hours.However, things will change if you work in a group, you would feel everyonr keep an eye on you so laziness will not be allowed especially when you Not only will you perfectly accomplish your task quite soon in the study group, but it is possible to learn how to become self-discipline at the same time.
With all the dimensions mentioned above incorporated, I strongly vote for the idea that team study is more efficient since it serve as a better way to learn from one another and enhance your ability of self-discipline.
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'really', 'so', 'as to', 'as a result', 'that is to say']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.154185022026 0.229887763892 67% => OK
Verbs: 0.174008810573 0.158761421928 110% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0704845814978 0.0866891130778 81% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0748898678414 0.046263068375 162% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0925110132159 0.0685040099705 135% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.11013215859 0.118717715034 93% => OK
Participles: 0.0308370044053 0.0351676179071 88% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.7892367841 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0374449339207 0.0309702414327 121% => OK
Particles: 0.00881057268722 0.00188951952338 466% => OK
Determiners: 0.0748898678414 0.0887237588012 84% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0242290748899 0.0209618222197 116% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0220264317181 0.0139019557991 158% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2262.0 2387.08602151 95% => OK
No of words: 391.0 408.028673835 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.78516624041 5.86048508987 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.48200974243 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.309462915601 0.338922669872 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.225063938619 0.251872472559 89% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.171355498721 0.174417080927 98% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0920716112532 0.112833075102 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7892367841 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590792838875 0.524397521467 113% => OK
Word variations: 70.6340573541 59.2087087015 119% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6684587814 68% => OK
Sentence length: 27.9285714286 20.5533526081 136% => OK
Sentence length SD: 130.916938927 48.84282405 268% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 161.571428571 120.699889404 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9285714286 20.5533526081 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.785714285714 0.644075263715 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 50.4349652905 45.7405998639 110% => OK
Elegance: 0.864516129032 1.45489161554 59% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27578854563 0.300154397459 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0932503749006 0.103427244359 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.102116407759 0.0752933317313 136% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.49715844942 0.497263757937 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.224757901447 0.151897553556 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936320296976 0.114077575197 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601561164011 0.0781384742642 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.211522229627 0.336927656856 63% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.03478369261 0.067059652881 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171639036468 0.210909579961 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041098365405 0.0618886996521 66% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8870967742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 8.42114695341 47% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 7.0 13.6433691756 51% => OK
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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