There is no shortage of debate whether to work as a team or independently. In my opinion, one should should work as a team rather than working individually. I feel this way for two reasons, which i explain in the following essay.
First of all, working as a team helps in brainstorming ideas. It is easier to gather ideas quickly and efficiently by working as team. For instance, if a person doing a programming project, who has minimal knowledge in coding faces trouble to complete the project. However, if that person works in a team of coders, he can get valuable support and can successfully complete the project.
Secondly, by working as a team one can know different perspectives which helps in making efficient decisions. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. About a year ago, when i was working on a final semester project on my own without any team. As a result, i failed to complete the project which is multi dimensional. Consequently, i got less marks in the final semester.
In conclusion, i believe that it is better to work as a team rather than working independently. This is because working as team helps in gathering efficient ideas without any flaws, and because it helps anyone to know different perspectives of any work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 52.1666666667 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1052.0 1977.66487455 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 218.0 407.700716846 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82568807339 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.48103885553 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00193523979 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 212.727598566 54% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52752293578 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 618.680645161 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.340019337 48.9658058833 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.1428571429 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5714285714 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 5.45110844103 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292896603044 0.236089414692 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116427756255 0.076458572812 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113495088281 0.0737576698707 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201152917835 0.150856017488 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694737866008 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 86.8835125448 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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