Each person has a different standard of success.Some people think money is the standard of success and some people think status is the best. However, I think the standard of success is to achieve the goals you set. Therefore, I think it is much more important to succeed than to gain happiness by failing. I will tell you three reasons to support my opinion.
To begin with, if you succeed, happiness will naturally follow. If I study hard and go to the university I want, I will be very happy. It is a pleasure because it is a success. On the other hand, if I had failed, I would probably lose the power to start over and feel sad. Also, self-esteem will be very low. Like this, everyone is happy when they succeed, energized and if they fail, they will be frustrated. For example, I was very happy and proud to get the grade I wanted at the end of the last exam because I studied hard to get a good science grade.
Next, if you succeed, you will get the confidence to take on another big challenge. If a person fails, of course, he or she can gain experience and learn, but if they succeed, they can gain more valuable confidence, a spirit of challenge and things. With this, they can gain strength from their current success and live their life harder while looking for greater success. That is why I think it helps us move forward with what we get from success rather than what we get from failure. For instance, a person who went to Seoul National University said, “ The best thing about getting accepted to this university was that I was able to gain confidence that I could achieve something bigger in the future.”
Last, the world recognizes success rather than failure. No matter how happy you are by failing, the world accomplishes success. As if only the first place recognizes it. Therefore, when people acknowledge you, you feel happy and happy because you achieved it. For example, if you achieve your dreams and get recognized by people just like BTS, you will be happier than failures.
This is why I think success is more important than remaining happy and optimistic when we fail: if you succeed, happiness will naturally follow, will get the confidence to take on other big challenges and the world will recognize you. Therefore, success guarantees more than failure.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ailing, the world accomplishes success. As if only the first place recognizes it. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i think, of course, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1897.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 408.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64950980392 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51440367217 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470588235294 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 577.8 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2562023144 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2272727273 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5454545455 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261495208354 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796202894941 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718233905514 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164644583277 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.077897963637 0.0645574589148 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.74 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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