It is easier to become educated today than it was in the past. Do you agree or disagree?
In this modern era in which we are living, there has been the advance of technology has made significant changes in different aspects of life, education in particular. Personally speaking, I firmly agree with this widespread point of view that it is much easier to become educated today than it was in the past due to some reasons. I will elaborate upon the momentous reasons in the following paragraph.
First, there has been monumental amount universities all around the world in the modern era. Needless to say that there is at least one university in each country. Even people who are living in remote areas of the world can educate in a nearby university. In contrast, in the past there was not enough places for gathering information and knowledge in compare with today. To pave the way, I would like to give an example of this. I am living in so small a village which is far from the city now, but there is several schools, library, and Language institution, to name but a few, even in this small village. In contrast, my father who also had been raised in this village could not continue his education because there was not any school in our village, but also in nearby villages. In a word, the more schools, the easier education for people.
Second, the advent of the internet has made education much easier. The effects of Internet is undeniable. Not only do the internet provide resources for anybody, but also it so useful media by providing online-education. It is my firm conviction that online-education can provide opportunity for a great many people who are under considerable time and money pressure. To pave the way for this reasons, I would like to give an example of this. I really like to study in one of the high prestigious seats of learning such as Alberta, Oxford, and Harvard, to name but a few. Never would I be able to afford the high expense of migration in order to do a degree in them. Surprisingly, I have recently understood that these universities offer online courses which I can take. Should I take these courses online, I would not have to spend a lot of money to study abroad. Hence, universities can offer online courses now which has made education much easier in compared with the past.
In the final analysis, according to above-mentioned points and examples, I strongly assert that it is much easier to educate now in compared with the past owing to a great many education places in different cities. Besides, tanks to online-courses human kinds are enjoy from so convenient a way for educating. Then, why not accept this fact that getting a degree and educating is highly effective now?
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 500, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are several schools'?
Suggestion: there are several schools
...age which is far from the city now, but there is several schools, library, and Language institution, to ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 388, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...and money pressure. To pave the way for this reasons, I would like to give an exampl...
^^^^
Line 4, column 264, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'enjoyed'.
Suggestion: enjoyed
...tanks to online-courses human kinds are enjoy from so convenient a way for educating....
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, if, really, second, so, then, at least, in contrast, in particular, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 76.0 52.1666666667 146% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2177.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 460.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73260869565 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6311565067 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77241594465 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 718.2 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6443764673 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7083333333 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54166666667 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222422494699 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579308791952 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852574377839 0.0737576698707 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149070861681 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663524681323 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.