It has been found out that homeschooling has it's pros and cons. From your own point of view, what would or wouldn't make you decide to homeschool your child or not
There is a contrary debate whether to let your child study in the traditional mean or in the concept of homeschooling. There are few drawbacks of homeschooling but it does not overcome it’s advantages. In my personal opinion, I would rather to teach my child in at home under my supervision than teach him\her at school. Especially for two major reasons it’s because homeschooling gives you tan ultimate harness of the child’s behavior. The other reason is that it creates a learning environment that would initiate the kid’s abilities.
Firstly, homeschooling is pondered to be the most effective mean that allows you to observe your children beaviors. In addition, it assures you of what and how the child is doing. Learning at home under the supervision of the parents enables the kid to be more considerate to the whole process of education , and prevents them from turning into a lax kid. My own experience is a compelling example of this. My parents taught me by themselves for my first yers then I finished my education at a private school, I noticed that my scores on the standerized tests were better when I uesd to be taught by the notion of homeschooling. Moreover, my sociall intelligence was much higher than the other children who used to learn in the traditional way of learning which is the school that we all know, Because of the observation of my parents in every thing I do. I buttress this method of education and I consider it the foremost among all means. Should you study that way, you gain a lot of vital benefits.
The other reason is that it produces a learning environment that effeiciently increase the child’s mental abilities. Researches shows that homeschooling develops a self-conscious, vission, and freedom. These serves to aid the child to choose what subjects he want to learn and be an adept in those particular subjects. Giving them the aptitude to pick for themselves leads them to be liable and more confident of what they want in life. Hence, they become highly ingenious, tend to have enough knowledge in non- academic information which they need in real life, and grasp the idea in the least time feasible. For instance, children who studied inside the walls of school without having the freedom of choice nor the opinion lacks the homeschooling student when it comes to going out to face what is outside. Therfore, homeschooling prosper an outsanding success in each and every aspect of life.
To conclude, studying in home is much better than any one of us can expect. It is the paramount method that gives you an ultimate knowledge in almost everything.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 214, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...ot overcome it's advantages. In my personal opinion, I would rather to teach my child in at...
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Line 3, column 307, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...derate to the whole process of education , and prevents them from turning into a l...
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Line 5, column 265, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
...id the child to choose what subjects he want to learn and be an adept in those parti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, so, then, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2188.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 445.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91685393258 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92410036888 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530337078652 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 676.8 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2485683813 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4545454545 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2272727273 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21099577162 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659057472148 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593732166357 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122498264807 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0827371559126 0.0645574589148 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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