The neighborhood we live in is an integral part of our lives. It is the place where we spend lots of hours and many years of our life. If a movie theater were going to be built in our neighborhood, I expect some residents would believe that it is a great idea; others would disagree. In my point of view, I support the idea of establishing a new movie theater for two main reasons, which I will explain in the following essay.
The most important reason is that construct a movie theater will create lots of jobs. In order to build a theater, civil, mechanical and electrical engineers, bricklayers and many other workers will be needed. Of course, This means that many people will have the opportunity to work. To illustrate that idea let us consider the following example. I remember when I was fifteen years old, a movie theater was built in my grandfather neighborhood. That project attracted lots of workers from a variety of sectors in order to work on it. And now, ten years after it was completed, it is still offering many jobs for the residents of the neighborhood to run it. As we can see, these individuals would not have had the opportunity to work at that time in the absence of that theater.
The second reason is that a new movie theater will add tax revenue for the city. Individuals who were deciding to stay at home or to go to a movie theater in another city, now they will go to the new theater in their hometown instead. Therefore, this will increase the amount of tax and bring prosperity to our community. For instance, after the theater in my grandfather neighborhood was built, many neighbors came to the neighborhood as the theater was there destination. As the result, much additional money spent each day in the region. After one or two years I began to notice that their city was spending more money on their schools, streets and even athletic facilities. This experience taught me that new businesses are beneficial for cities.
Gathering together those ideas and illustrating examples, it is clear that there would be many expected benefits to our neighborhood if a new theater were built in it. Such as generating new careers and attracting new taxes.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, still, therefore, for instance, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1810.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 386.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68911917098 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73884069556 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497409326425 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 555.3 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0657949764 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1904761905 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.380952381 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 5.45110844103 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190077524779 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589639855659 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469713152626 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130037267123 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0148627347325 0.0645574589148 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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