It has recently been announced that a new movie theater may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
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The neighberhood we live in is very important for us. we have lived in this place since 2000 and spend all of time of our life in this neighborhood. some residents agree with addtion a new movie theater, others don't. In my view, the addition the movie theater can have positive roles for two reasons.
The main reason is that the addition can decrease the number of crime in the neighborhood. this occurenese causes more peaceful. For example, when I was elementory school, some of rebillous youth in my neighberhood bother kids. I always was anxiety when I went to school. but it became gradually less when mayor announced that the movie theater buid in town. All of people tried to use more this situation for obtain more money. In addition, the movie theater added jobs for all that it decreased crime in my neighborhood. As you can see, these people wouldn't have had more peacefulness if it weren't for the addition of the movie theater.
The another reason is that, the movie theater entertainte all of people. this make us more fun and pleasure. For example, my brother preferred spend all of his time in home because there isn't place for fun. he was bored and upset until added the movie thaeter in our city. he instead of longered in home went to movie theater and became more fun. this experience taught me that new places are very advantagous for all of people.
In sum,though some may oppose the plan, a new movie theater woul be a graete addition to my hometown or any other city. Not only will the addition generate more fun and pleasure for residents but also the decreasing crime could help the city provide more peaceful. Every city should introduce downtown and fun place into commity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, for example, in addition, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 302.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70860927152 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4956169639 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519867549669 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.0541038328 48.9658058833 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.7142857143 100.406767564 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.380952381 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 5.45110844103 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165157821962 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574245311681 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453851744066 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107437235951 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0119072864701 0.0645574589148 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 11.7677419355 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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