It has recently been announced that a large shopping center may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Recently announcement of an upcoming shopping center rise controversy. Some people believe it will cause a lot noise to the neighborhood since they expect more traffic. However, a new shopping center can cause life of citizen more convenient, provide a new choice for families and friends to spend their weekend, and most importantly it can also boost economic of the city.
A close large shopping center means buying supply for citizens of neighborhood easier than ever. Large shopping center have variety of different product and supplier, which means most people shopping need can be easily fulfilled. A large selection of brand will all present in this shopping center. It cannot be easier for people to compare different product and pick up the one people really like. On the other hand, close location means people do not have to go other way to other side of town for shopping. Thus, they won’t have to spend forever on their way to the shopping center, but rather spend more time on shopping itself.
Since a lot shopping center also comes with good restaurant and movie theater, friends and families have more option to choose for their reunion. Shopping centers today are much more compact than it used to be, since it usually combines different function in to a single package, for instance, dinning, movie theater, or even small amusement park for kid. A new shopping center not only provide a perfect place for shopping, but also present us a new way to hang out with friends. People can have a nice dinner after enjoying their shopping. Thus, people can enrich their social life.
Most importantly, shopping center bring business opportunity and thus can boost economic of the city. Shopping center attract different retailer to open their store in the city. When they earn money, they will contribute tax for government. Then, government spend those money on improvement of people’s life. Meanwhile, new store also open new employment opportunity. Thus, unemployment rate in the city will also decrease. By attracting more inventor in to the town, and lower unemployment rate, it is not impossible to see that people earn more income and have a better life than before.
To sum up, building a new shopping center can help individual improve their social life, and most importantly accelerate economy in the town. Thus, I would recommend building a new shopping center.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 264, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this money' or 'those moneys', 'those monies'?
Suggestion: this money; those moneys; those monies
... for government. Then, government spend those money on improvement of people's life. M...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, so, then, thus, while, for instance, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2012.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 396.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08080808081 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59053495241 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497474747475 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 615.6 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.8939354177 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4782608696 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2173913043 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21739130435 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129650096685 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049064920989 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477855767826 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0838083047652 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361831172966 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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