It has recently been announced that a new restaurant may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
I am completely disagree with building a new restaurant in my neighborhood. Although having a restaurant near the house has some advantages such as buying food whenever you feel hungry or you can walk to the restaurant, but I think the disadvantages that it bring to you does not worth it.
The most important determinant of building a restaurant near a place is that it brings a lot of noise and pollutions to our neighborhood. The restaurant brings many people to your neighborhood and a lot of people bring pollution and dirtiness to that place. I live in such a place. When I was a child our neighborhood was awesome. It was quiet and always clean and we were really happy to live in such a place and every afternoon children went out and played with their friends .But then there was a big restaurant near our house. Then it started to become noisy, messy and busy place. There is always a lot of cars and it is really hard to find a place to park our car. We cannot even see children’s playing in the street because it becomes a dangerous place.
Another disadvantage is that there is a lot of smells near that restaurant. They make a lot of different foods which are really tasty and it is hard to resist to the smells that they make, especially for children. But it is not good to eat foods in restaurant a lot because the food they make is not as healthy as a homemade food. They may not use good foodstuff and they may bring some illness to people who eat in restaurants regularly.
Despite all disadvantages that building a restaurant brings to a place, it has some benefits too. You can have a food whenever you feel hungry. You can also walk to that restaurant so you do not need to spend a lot of time finding a parking place.
But I think that the disadvantages of a building a restaurant near your neighborhood overweight the advantages of it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'may', 'really', 'so', 'then', 'i think', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.191780821918 0.229887763892 83% => OK
Verbs: 0.167123287671 0.158761421928 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0739726027397 0.0866891130778 85% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0575342465753 0.046263068375 124% => OK
Pronouns: 0.104109589041 0.0685040099705 152% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.101369863014 0.118717715034 85% => OK
Participles: 0.0191780821918 0.0351676179071 55% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.78359501678 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0438356164384 0.0309702414327 142% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.117808219178 0.0887237588012 133% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0164383561644 0.0209618222197 78% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.013698630137 0.0139019557991 99% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1863.0 2387.08602151 78% => OK
No of words: 342.0 408.028673835 84% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44736842105 5.86048508987 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.48200974243 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.269005847953 0.338922669872 79% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.184210526316 0.251872472559 73% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.146198830409 0.174417080927 84% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.111111111111 0.112833075102 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78359501678 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.438596491228 0.524397521467 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 44.1611524142 59.2087087015 75% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5533526081 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1753804754 48.84282405 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.5 120.699889404 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.5533526081 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.644075263715 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 37.4210526316 45.7405998639 82% => OK
Elegance: 0.95 1.45489161554 65% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251129252633 0.300154397459 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.146405501791 0.103427244359 142% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.116378993165 0.0752933317313 155% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.548804311721 0.497263757937 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.203202105339 0.151897553556 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100641114915 0.114077575197 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424112083018 0.0781384742642 54% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.222986498663 0.336927656856 66% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0664905980091 0.067059652881 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164188208937 0.210909579961 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029137138751 0.0618886996521 47% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8870967742 25% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.86379928315 285% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 8.42114695341 12% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 7.0 2.4623655914 284% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 13.6433691756 81% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.