It is important to keep old friends than to make new
Some folks believe that this is very important to get acquainted with new people. Others,
however, think that they are better off with old friends. In my opinion, it is significant to keep
in touch with your trusted buddies instead of looking for new ones.
To start off, people that we know for ages are usually loyal and trustworthy. If you need
assistance at work or with your chores, they will help you out with that. For instance, my close
friend helped me recently with my term paper even though he was not familiar with the
subject itself.
Apart from that, old friends can understand our feelings better than anyone else. They can
cheer us up or give a bit of good advice if we are pissed off. This is crucial for teens these days
since Gen Z is more prone to be depressed. I have plenty of friends who are in limbo; thus,
they need to talk to someone close to feel themselves better.
Finally, I assume that it is very difficult to find new friends today due to the fact that people
communicate via the Internet most of the time. Some folks are basically not willing to leave
their houses which makes it harder to get acquainted. Therefore, it is pivotal to have a couple
of trusted friends that will never let you down. No matter what is going to happen, you always
have someone you can talk to if needed.
All in all, I believe that people should maintain a good relationship with their old buddies
under any circumstances. It is very hard to make new friends and sometimes it takes ages to
trust them. Hence, I will stick to my close friends since we know each other very well.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, hence, however, if, look, so, therefore, thus, well, apart from, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 293.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53583617747 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29186922886 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590443686007 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 618.680645161 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.0765617046 48.9658058833 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.1764705882 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2352941176 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94117647059 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.53405017921 397% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237204446599 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677187881785 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645381023172 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0635572830943 0.150856017488 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615317287892 0.0645574589148 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 58.1214874552 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 86.8835125448 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.