It is important to keep your old friends than t is to make new friends. Do you agree, or disagree with this statament. Use specific reasons and examples to explain your idea.
Human is a kind of mammal that only socializes and makes friends. A person have different friends from school to work in his/ her life. Some people believe that old friendships are better than new ones, although others think that making new friends have several significant benefits. Though both sides have pros and cons, I believe that making new friends are more important than keeping old ones for personal, social and historical dimensions.
Firstly, making new friends provides people some important personal benefits. A person's old friends are generally have the same backgrounds with him / her such as educational and economic aspects, because they are usually from school or workplace. However, people make new friends as they are growing, generally from different places such as clubs, bars or coffees, parties or friends of friends. Thus, these new people have different backgrounds, different jobs, different political ideas, different economic status, and these can helpful for your own benefits. For example, after I had graduated I met a friend from Latin dance club, she was a lawyer while I was a banker, and she helped me for a court of my family.
Secondly, making new friends have some social advantages on people. In my opinion learning a person's life is a very excited event that resembles as exploring a new place, because every person is a world by him/herself. Moreover, the number of old people usually less than those of new people, and if you are a open-minded person, you can probably make more new friends. These two social benefits are so important for a person life.
Lastly, the proponents of the idea that keeping old friends is more important than making new ones argues that it provides historical advantages for friendships. They states that knowing a person's past and having some memories shared make the friendship stronger. However, I am totally this agree with this idea, because ın my opinion people can be blind for people that they have known for years in contrary with it is believed. On the other hand, if you make a new friend, you examine that person entairely, so this makes the friendship more powerful.
All in all, the advantages of making new friends outweigh the advantages of keeping old friendships. If you make new friends you will be a more social person while you provides some benefits from him/her. Making the friendship more powerful is another advantage of making new friends.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 76, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
... socializes and makes friends. A person have different friends from school to work i...
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Line 3, column 79, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'A person' or simply 'persons'?
Suggestion: A person; Persons
...eople some important personal benefits. A persons old friends are generally have the same...
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Line 3, column 115, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...ts. A persons old friends are generally have the same backgrounds with him / her suc...
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Line 5, column 94, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ges on people. In my opinion learning a persons life is a very excited event that resem...
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Line 5, column 309, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...han those of new people, and if you are a open-minded person, you can probably ma...
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Line 7, column 168, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'state'
Suggestion: state
...orical advantages for friendships. They states that knowing a persons past and having ...
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Line 9, column 102, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... advantages of keeping old friendships. If you make new friends you will be a more...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, kind of, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 52.1666666667 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2047.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 406.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04187192118 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59176144551 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455665024631 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 622.8 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2767106566 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.35 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 5.45110844103 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293707864695 0.236089414692 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112735290874 0.076458572812 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645722428204 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198295536355 0.150856017488 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386817370347 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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