it is important to know about all events happening aroun the world?
In these modern days, there are a lot of events around the word which can be arose from different aspects of life like social life, environmental events and so forth. It is a controversial issue among people that they have to whether or not keep themselves up to date with all events occurring around the world. I, personally, subscribe to this idea that it is crucial for every individual to be aware about all events around the world even it is not likely to have effect in their lives. Such an approach not only do give them a good chance to communicate with more people, but also make them flourish their future.
In first place, it is not to mention that most people when wanted to would start connection with others they talk about occurrence. It is very suitable and convenience way to make a discussion by which sometimes people make long-term relationships. As far as new friendship is concerned, it is essential for people to have a good awareness about current events. They will not be restricted only to choose someone who is as knowledgeable as themselves, I mean, those people that know the same events. For instance, I used to follow just events that were possible to have great impact in my daily life. As I obtained more experiences, I found that there are many situations in all of which I had nothing to do with existed people there just since I was not familiar with their discussion. I was often silent in groups, and it was very tough matter to me to find a new relationship. Thanks to such an achieved experience, I change my point of view and keep myself up to date with all events around the world. This honestly have had good result in my life by which the number of my friends is increasing.
Secondly, galloping rate of increase in science, technology, innovations and so on need a lot of efforts to people to be up-to-the-minute as far as their success is concerned. Nowadays, as we know, most events are tied to each other which bring people with a demand of being aware about events more than just those directly connect to their field of study, work and so more. If they wanted to capture their future possible opportunities, they must have versatile knowledge. It will not be possible only if individuals read daily about all events around the world and learn from them. For instance, I am a material engineering and work on electronic materials. If I took required level of understanding to be success in my field lightly, I would follow events that are about materials like BST, PZT and like them, but certainly I will languish my work condition. There are a lot of events that can indirectly affect my situation of work. For example, some recently innovation in electronic materials came from events that happen for our environment. Researchers, those that are up to date, read such an event on internet or see on television, and after that make a new equipment which can limit such an occurrence.
In summary, with all this taken into account, I do believe that it is necessary for people to know about all events around the world, or otherwise their future opportunities to be success in their work or study will be extremely decreased, and they will have a very few friends. Who, in his or her right mind, can deny the importa
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, honestly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, i mean, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 15.1003584229 199% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 74.0 43.0788530466 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 94.0 52.1666666667 180% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2697.0 1977.66487455 136% => OK
No of words: 580.0 407.700716846 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.90746259869 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72150188916 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 267.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.460344827586 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 855.0 618.680645161 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6865172859 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.375 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230706456385 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686575844041 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702527540179 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17023354775 0.150856017488 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312387232971 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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