Nowadays, world is full of colorful event that happens all around the universe. Some event is very important for people to know in which it helps them to be aware about neighborhood life. The most important question regarding this is that it is if different people should have knowledge of event in their world or not. From my perspective, I assert that it is not necessary for people to be aware of event in universe and in what follows I will attempt to address the most discernable reasons.
First, time is limited and no one is able to follow all the events. Accordingly, in each part of the world an event may happen, regardless that if is it good or not, people may be enthusiastic to be aware of those event but time never let them to know. For instance, I usually work from 8 am to 10 pm. Therefore, I don’t have enough time to follow any kinds of event and after some minutes talk to my wife I would prefer to go to the bed. This real story is usually happening day and day and as a result of it I cannot follow even important event.
Second, it may not be very decent to some people to follow. According to this, some people really career about the material that an event can have. Actually, negative point may make people regret to follow news. My mother's policy is a good epitome regarding this. She never listens to news in her routine life. She always recommends to be care about the time. The main problem in her eyes is that people must be happy in their career and in every day’s life some bitter event may happen but does it cost to irritate ourselves for such a thing? That suggestion always prevents me to be aware of every day’s event.
Finally, different events have influence over performance of human in life. Indeed, people should never care about event that may influence on their work. According to the news, last month I noticed that United State made a Draconian role on immigration. That news gave me cold feet and since I was preparing for TOEFL exam, I started to talk to myself in a way that the exam won’t make me any benefit since all the doors has been closed, so I canceled the exam. After two months the law were broken. That story taught me that different event may influence on people performance and its biter to neglect them.
All in all, as the aforementioned examples have illustrated, it is more convenient for people to not be aware of any kind of events around the world. Not only listening to colorful event heighten sad feeling and limit people's time but also it has bad effect over life. So, why should we still listen to such a news?
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 209, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this event' or 'those events'?
Suggestion: this event; those events
...ople may be enthusiastic to be aware of those event but time never let them to know. For in...
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Line 5, column 190, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[2]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'regret following'.
Suggestion: regret following
...ctually, negative point may make people regret to follow news. My mothers policy is a good epito...
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Line 5, column 323, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommends being'.
Suggestion: recommends being
...to news in her routine life. She always recommends to be care about the time. The main problem i...
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Line 7, column 469, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...as been closed, so I canceled the exam. After two months the law were broken. That st...
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Line 9, column 309, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'news'.
Suggestion: news
... So, why should we still listen to such a news?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, also, but, finally, first, if, may, really, regarding, second, so, still, therefore, thus, for instance, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2150.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 477.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50733752621 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67336384929 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42375935077 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488469601677 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 687.6 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0199965236 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6923076923 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3461538462 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20556802289 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622181943588 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620071415859 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133865726586 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0671029916922 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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