Throughout the human life, friends can play a vital rule on their elation. A person can spend his time to be delightful by choosing decent friends in his carrier. Some people believe that any one must have different kinds of friend for his leisure time. Others disagree. From my point of view, I postulate that a person needs plenty of friends. In the following, I will attempt to address the most discernible reasons.
The main reason is that, various atmosphere make life much happier. This is due to more places that a person can experience. For example, I am a student in M.Sc. course in Tehran. Since my university rules are severe, I never go out for fun with my friends. Study in a same room for more that fourteen hours a day, give me a kind of syndrome and I really exhausted. Conversely, my brother' Morteza' live in Esfahan and has multiplicity of friends. He always spend his time with different group of friends and experience different environment. Even though the city that my brother lives is more condense than mine, but he is more fun. So different friends help a person to be in various situation and make him more fun.
The other reason is that, different kind of friends help a person to learn more. Different persons have various jobs and if a person have more friends he can implement their experience on his life. For instance, The time that I was in high school, the class that I was, every student has his own ability in specific major. Since I encountered difficulties to solve almost all the problems, I tried to have relationship with sagacious students. I could learn different courses of different persons, as a sample 'Vahid' taught me mathematics and 'Amir' worked on physics. Because of diversity of friends, I could elucidate my problems and finally I took good marks in high school and that made me happy. This experience taught me that, different people have various number of ability; a person can absorb different knowledge an as a result of it progress in his life rapidly
All in all, as the aforementioned examples have illustrated, more than few friends help a person in his carrier to be joyful. Not only in a person can be in different atmosphere , but also he can raise his experience through different situation. Therefore, I think that people must have plenty of friends.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, finally, if, really, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1919.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 405.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73827160494 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69121668345 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503703703704 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 597.6 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.3295907825 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4347826087 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6086956522 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128552489311 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0405403272169 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0328121753125 0.0737576698707 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0861712953577 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325990633776 0.0645574589148 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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