Arts an artists are one of the most important part of a society. Some people believe that government funding is obligatory to ensure arts flourishment and bunches of people can see their masterpieces too. Nonetheless, some other people thinks that the funds usually allocated to the tricky plan and so government should never subsidize them. Personally speaking, I believe that government funding facilitate art progression and in what follows the most discernible reasons are drawn.
First and foremost, the home of arts are in poor part of a country. Commonly, parsimonious people try to draw handcrafts or sing a songs to become popular and afford their expenses. However, despite of their outstanding pieces, most of them remain unpopular. So, the governments can play a vital role in this part by assigning appropriate funds to their job. In this shape, an artist, gradually achieve progress, tries to get more comment on his masterpiece, fixing his/her defects and finally flourish his/her talents. This is only due to the reason that the get rid of their monetary manner and start to just think about their arts. Hence, governmental fund can lay a solid foundation to flourish artists' talent.
Another reason which deserves some words to mention is that, by the usage of governmental fund, they could cover all the expenses and focus on popularity. Indeed, each time they hope to become popular and publicity demonstrate their job such as, art galleries, concerts, exhibitions, orchestras and so forth. The preponderance of people in these circumstances--art places-- would guarantee high income and happiness. People make happy of the art and government can benefit through ticket. Hence, after a while the money comes back to the government budget and if we consider this period long, we can see than without expenditure, an artist is displayed to country. Therefore, an artist flourishes his/her talents without considerable expenditure since the money comes back in long term.
Notwithstanding to the profit of government funding on artists, some scholars and scientists believe that the fund could be allocated to other parts for subjective purposes. Indeed, one person can take the money for art purposes and expend it for other jobs such as, Construction Company, real state, marketing, etc. This is a fraudulent plan that researchers have premonition about and believe that governmental fund would not be allotted to the arts.
All in all, as the above-mentioned examples have illustrated, it seems more reasonable to the government to assign funds for flourishing and promoting artist talents. In this regard, also the money would come back in large scale. However, the plan has some drawbacks such as sneaky plans which the governments should think about.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 6, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an artist' or simply 'artists'?
Suggestion: an artist; artists
Arts an artists are one of the most important part of a...
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Line 2, column 129, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a song' or simply 'songs'?
Suggestion: a song; songs
...s people try to draw handcrafts or sing a songs to become popular and afford their expe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, hence, however, if, nonetheless, so, therefore, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2336.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 443.0 442.535393258 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27313769752 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92694625065 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541760722348 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 703.8 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1262750705 60.3974514979 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.565217391 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2608695652 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.65217391304 5.21951772744 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390612255951 0.243740707755 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115626090158 0.0831039109588 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0988944070545 0.0758088955206 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242016522567 0.150359130593 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111909750564 0.0667264976115 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 100.480337079 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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