News always plays a pivotal role in our daily life. It serves as a tool for us to gain information and understand what is going on in this world. Nevertheless, the issue regarding the plethora of news has aroused public concern and at the same time provoke a heated debate about whether we should stop reading news for a while. Some people inclined to be strong believers in the extreme claim that we should always follow news. Perhaps sound and attractive as their argument seems, it can hardly bear closer analysis.
Accordingly, I, without hesitation, advocate that we should give us a break from the flood of news. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will elaborate on in the following essay.
First of all, a break from news will be beneficial for our mental health. Nowadays news company tend to use horrific headline to win readers attention. To be more specific, because negative news will attract more viewers due to our curiosity, the focus of news often fixate into the negative part of our country. As a result, we often feel overwhelmed by all these awful stories and it will seriously affect our mental stability. A day without watching news is necessary for modern people, it forces us to see this world in our own eyes, and appreciate its beauty without many concerns.
Second, few day off news will actually make us see the world in a clear view. There are too many news stories and some of them can be wrong and will bring misunderstanding to us. This point can be better and further supported by the example from my own experience. Last year my city experienced lockdown because of the spread of coronavirus. Before the lockdown, there was several news boast about the store will has no food in this period and people have to starve. It made so many people became hoarders in panic. Few days later, people then realized that the store was still open and there was no shortage of supply. Obviously, this example may inform us that instead of following the news in blind, a step off the news world enable us to see it more precisely.
Considering all the reasons and examples discussed above, we can safely come to the conclusion that giving yourself a break from news world is necessary, which should be definitely attributed to the relaxation of our mind and a clear view of this world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 9, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun day seems to be countable; consider using: 'few days'.
Suggestion: few days
...eauty without many concerns. Second, few day off news will actually make us see the ...
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Line 7, column 377, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[8]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun news seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'some news'.
Suggestion: some news
...avirus. Before the lockdown, there was several news boast about the store will has no food ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, but, first, if, may, nevertheless, regarding, second, so, still, then, while, i feel, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1914.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 409.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67970660147 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52041360519 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540342298289 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8150217185 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1428571429 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4761904762 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38095238095 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370230190173 0.236089414692 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103464641745 0.076458572812 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611777503361 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187481290377 0.150856017488 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0778968866123 0.0645574589148 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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