It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
Have a good relationship with other people is a prominent issue for everyone and has an important effect on people’s life. A person tries to find good friends from infantile era to adult. A controversial question which is often raised regarding this idea is that whether having a relationship with an old friend is suitable or making new friends. Where I to choose between these two alternatives, I would select the former because of two reasons which will aptly substantiate my viewpoint in the following paragraphs.
First one is that our old friends know us for a long time ago; actually, we have grown up together from childhood until now, and we had some experiences with each other. If we need help, they can help us better than our other friends. They pay attention to us more than our new friends and like us more than them. We can speak together for hours and enjoy from speaking. My own experience is a compelling example of this. The name of my best and oldest friend is Ali, and we grow up together from when we were 7. I have no brother and sister, and I do not feel relief with my parents because I live separately, therefore when I face a problem or arduous situation in my life he is the best choice I think about.
The second one is that we can trust our old friend more than our novel friends. If we confront a bad event, or we have a problem with our family, we need someone who knows our parents and us to help us. As a matter of fact, we prefer to talk about our difficulties with our old friends, because they can advise us expeditiously. For instance, last month I talked to my mother loudly because she had bought me some stuff that I did not like them, and did not need them. I was so angry at that time, but after that, I think that I Should not say that words to her. I needed someone to give me some advice and tell me how I can speak to my mom and retrieve that event.
In conclusion, In my opinion, It is better to keep our old friends because they know us from a long time, and they can advise us better than other people, and we can rely upon them more than our new friends.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, if, regarding, second, so, therefore, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 82.0 43.0788530466 190% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1720.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 401.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.28927680798 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4489946186 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501246882793 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6319803867 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5555555556 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2777777778 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222075541807 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769171921444 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0991198502241 0.0737576698707 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160584476217 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564617284824 0.0645574589148 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.9 10.9000537634 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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