It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
No one can deny that there are both negative and positive aspects of friends. Some people prefer make new friends, however, other people would like keeping old friends. If I were to choose one, I would like holding my old friends for several reasons, which I will explain in the following paragraphs.
First of all, old friends are the best support that people can find from anyone, because they was, are, and will friends for so many years. In my case, when I pass through though time, I lost my parents in an accident car several years ago, and my friend was the most important person who stays with me in those rough times. I never forget his support.
Second, if you want to spend time old friend are better choise than a new one. Specially when people want to share anything that it special between each other. For instance, I’d like play tennis, but it is not only a game, also it is my best time on the day where I can talking with my friend about so much things. Thus, those tennis games I can share with old friends.
Finally, confident it is other virtue that old friend have. In other words, people can trust to them that they want. For example, I am living in Argentina, but for business reasons I have to move to US, and I did not who could take care my kids, but my best old friend offering me that he can doing it. For me was not only the best option, but also the best person who can take care my children.
In conclusion, for all those reasons I mentioned above, I firmly believe that old friends are better choise than make a new friends.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'friend'
Suggestion: friend
...anyone, because they was, are, and will friends for so many years. In my case, when I p...
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Line 5, column 271, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'talk'
Suggestion: talk
... is my best time on the day where I can talking with my friend about so much things. Th...
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Line 5, column 303, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...e I can talking with my friend about so much things. Thus, those tennis games I can ...
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Line 7, column 294, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'do'
Suggestion: do
...best old friend offering me that he can doing it. For me was not only the best option...
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Line 9, column 125, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'friend'?
Suggestion: friend
...iends are better choise than make a new friends.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, second, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 52.1666666667 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 1977.66487455 65% => OK
No of words: 293.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37542662116 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.0953018703 2.67179642975 78% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546075085324 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 618.680645161 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2266403162 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4666666667 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5333333333 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53333333333 5.45110844103 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271959741678 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10056198514 0.076458572812 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.095743559116 0.0737576698707 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178203524222 0.150856017488 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057737408505 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 58.1214874552 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.52 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 86.8835125448 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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