It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends
It is generally said that friends are needs and friends are true. No one can deny the fact that a colleague plays an indispensable role in everyone's life because without them we cannot enjoy the activity. In my view, keeping an old companion in our life could be more beneficial instead of aking new ones. Here, I will provide some reasons for my agreement in the subsequent paragraph.
To begin with, old friends are like our family and we cannot make a new family as per our requirement. One thing I learned from my own life experience is that people made lots of friends in order to learn a variety of activities or some creative things, though whenever you need any help at that time only old friends come first. For example, in the era of 21st century, everyone made so many friends on social networking sites owing to the advents of internet yet, if you suffer from some problems such as a medical emergency that time you ought to call your old friends rather than putting the message on social media.
Secondly, sometimes keeping old friends in our activity, make our growth enthusiastic, joyful and relaxed. When we feel stress and anxiety then we would prefer to go out with old or school friends because only they can understand what pressure had been felt. According to some studies, it shows that people enjoy more hearts with their friends instead their growth partner. Furthermore, our old friend tries every possible thing to make us happy and solve issues which we have been facing in the soul.
However, nowadays the computation of making a wide range of friends is being increased because it would help people to be popular and famous in the world. For instance, many celebrities have lots of followers and friends, which makes them renowned in the world. Moreover, by making new friends, we can learn different languages and a variety of cultures. Suppose, friends from china and the USA facilitate us in understanding what culture and the believes they are holding. Nevertheless, these new friends would not help us, if we trap in some difficult situation. Sometimes these social media friends have used our emotions and take advantage to do fraud with us.
In a nutshell, old friends can take care of ours as a family does. They can help us financially also if we had a scarcity of money. There are a few advantages of gathering new friends but the drawbacks of making new friends more overweight. Therefore, I firmly believe that it’s always important to keep old friends who helped us in every phase of the soul. As a result, we enjoy more activity with old friends.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2152.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 452.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7610619469 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53732416928 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526548672566 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 665.1 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.536115087 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8181818182 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5454545455 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 5.45110844103 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.466412956585 0.236089414692 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143006864727 0.076458572812 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0985611653997 0.0737576698707 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.279068634199 0.150856017488 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0832636743053 0.0645574589148 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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