Friendship is always regarded as one of the most critical parts of social circle. Some people have argued that keeping in touch with old friends is much more important than finding new ones. While this view seems absurd at first glance, I believe it can be true at a broad perspective.
The first reason to support such a view is that hanging around with old friend is time-saving and efficient. It is clearly perceived that becoming acquaintance with stranger needs time for introduction and small conversations. On the other side, old friends have deep knowledge about one's character and emotion. To illustrate, consider a person who has difficulty with declaring his undergraduate major. When he tends to consult a friend, an old one can obviously help well as he/she knows him for long time. In essence, not only does the amount of time save but also the efficiency of this relation is much higher.
Another justification for keeping an old friends is the trustworthy among old friendships. Apparently, long-lasting relationship can be a sign of fidelity. Having long and strong relationship with friends require both deep understanding and trusty in any social circles. This will not happened, unless one involves in long-run relation. In addition, communicating with specific group of friends neither means fear of embracing new things nor nostalgic. It can be known as loyalty, one of primary rule of having strong and intimate friendship. In fact, time is one of best criteria for any individuals to evaluate how reliable are their friends and how long their friendships will continue.
Although old friendship is worthwhile, it should be noted that any new friend is going to become an old one when time flies. Since humans are regarded as social creatures, now and then, need to communicate and develope their relationships even if they have just a few close friends. There are some specific occasions in everyone's life such as entrance to college or work-place that can cause extending new friends which ones should be aware to find precious friends among them.
To recapitulate, different aspects of whether finding new friends or having the old ones have been considered. As it was mentioned, when time passes not only the fidelity among friends is being clear but also makes them more valuable. However, extending the social circulation should never overlooked.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 284, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
..., old friends have deep knowledge about ones character and emotion. To illustrate, c...
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Line 3, column 285, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'happen'
Suggestion: happen
...ty in any social circles. This will not happened, unless one involves in long-run relati...
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Line 3, column 564, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the best'.
Suggestion: of the best
...timate friendship. In fact, time is one of best criteria for any individuals to evaluat...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'apparently', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'while', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.2037470726 0.229887763892 89% => OK
Verbs: 0.182669789227 0.158761421928 115% => OK
Adjectives: 0.126463700234 0.0866891130778 146% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0585480093677 0.046263068375 127% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0351288056206 0.0685040099705 51% => OK
Prepositions: 0.121779859485 0.118717715034 103% => OK
Participles: 0.0632318501171 0.0351676179071 180% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.8520898024 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0210772833724 0.0309702414327 68% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0655737704918 0.0887237588012 74% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0234192037471 0.0209618222197 112% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0187353629977 0.0139019557991 135% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2377.0 2387.08602151 100% => OK
No of words: 389.0 408.028673835 95% => OK
Chars per words: 6.11053984576 5.86048508987 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.48200974243 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.359897172237 0.338922669872 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.280205655527 0.251872472559 111% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.203084832905 0.174417080927 116% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.136246786632 0.112833075102 121% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8520898024 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570694087404 0.524397521467 109% => OK
Word variations: 66.3426397074 59.2087087015 112% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.6818181818 20.5533526081 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9589250489 48.84282405 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.045454545 120.699889404 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6818181818 20.5533526081 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.636363636364 0.644075263715 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 45.7023837345 45.7405998639 100% => OK
Elegance: 1.40677966102 1.45489161554 97% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326347801781 0.300154397459 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0683273797565 0.103427244359 66% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0554873524978 0.0752933317313 74% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.442456686645 0.497263757937 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.102083265893 0.151897553556 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103077118285 0.114077575197 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818235313144 0.0781384742642 105% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.260978315929 0.336927656856 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0300028370182 0.067059652881 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217776445958 0.210909579961 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508045899469 0.0618886996521 82% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8870967742 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 19.0 8.42114695341 226% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 21.0 13.6433691756 154% => OK
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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