It is more important to keep your old friends than to make new friends.
We have diffrent type of friend with us. Moreover everyday we find new friend too. Personally I disagree with the statement that old friends are more important than new friends. I fell this way for two main resons, which I will explain in following essay.
First of all, Making new friends helps to identfy new type of friend. We have old friend with same tipe of atitueds and we might find a new friend which is totaly diffrent character. My own experience is a compelling example of this. I have lot of old friends who are very frienly to me and care about me. Last month I join to a new job and I found a new friend who is working in my office next to me. He is very funny person. He is wont take anything serious and crack jokes all the time he get a chance. Been with him in the office I am enjoying alot and I am loving my new job alot. I don't feel any tired working for long hours with my new friend.
Srecondly, The new friend are more likely to hang out with us than old friend. Because the new frinds which we make are from mostly where you are currently working. Therefor they are with us most of the time. For instant, I had good friend at college when I was schooling. But evantually they become bussy after attending school. I didn't have much friend to go out when I fell along. But when I start working I found lot of friends.Every friday we all use to go to the pub after work. Most Sunday's we use to play rugger since Sunday is day off for all of us. There for I spent mot of the time with my new friends than old friends.
In concluton I strongly believe that new friends play important role in our lifes than old friends. This is because making new friends helps identify new types of friends and new friend are more attached to us than old friends.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e have diffrent type of friend with us. Moreover everyday we find new friend too. Person...
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...serious and crack jokes all the time he get a chance. Been with him in the office I...
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... in the office I am enjoying alot and I am loving my new job alot. I dont feel any tired ...
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...ly to hang out with us than old friend. Because the new frinds which we make are from m...
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... I start working I found lot of friends.Every friday we all use to go to the pub afte...
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...ound lot of friends.Every friday we all use to go to the pub after work. Most Sunda...
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... to the pub after work. Most Sundays we use to play rugger since Sunday is day off ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 342.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.21637426901 4.8611393121 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20633750219 2.67179642975 83% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482456140351 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 435.6 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.0189450689 48.9658058833 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 60.0833333333 100.406767564 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.25 20.6045352989 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.75 5.45110844103 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.421196662147 0.236089414692 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137881761859 0.076458572812 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.156963464519 0.0737576698707 213% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.339490169217 0.150856017488 225% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136392713975 0.0645574589148 211% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 11.7677419355 48% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 58.1214874552 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.1575268817 51% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.6 10.9000537634 61% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.45 8.01818996416 80% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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