It’s better to make wrong decision than make no decision at all.” Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Give reasons or specific examples to illustrate your answer.
Everybody have to make a lot of decisions during their life. It is so much important to know deciding a wrong choice in any situation can help us in the future. Some people think it is logical not to do anything when we believe our choice is wrong. However, some others feel that wrong decisions can aid us in the long run ahead. I think humans should decide wrong to thrive due to many obvious reasons.
First, people can learn from their mistakes. So, if they allow themselves to pick some wrong decisions, they can analyze their bad outcomes happened due to their wrong choice. This can give them fundamental information about the issues with their decision. while, if they have not allow themselves to do a few wrong decisions, they have never had the chance and opportunity to rectify themselves.
Secondly, normally, we should consider different solutions to understand the best suited pathway for any problem. Humans’ brains need a specific amount of information to solve any obstacle. Thus, generally, we cannot reach any valuable result if we have not learn some from other poor decisions mistakes. for instance, my friend Jim always had fear to decide about different incidents. He would pass the decision to another person whenever he confronts a delicate situation. Surprisingly, one time Jim was asked to prepare the schools camp for summer alone and there was no student to help him. Eventually, he decided to depend on himself for one time. He tried and made a series of wrong decisions but at last he noticed that the only thing which assisted him to bring his best was these stupid first mistakes. so he finds out that there can be even something useful in a bad choice. You must just not panic and understand your previous wrong decisions.
Last but not least, anybody especially young generation should practice mastering in any skill including a decision. So, making a wrong decision can help them in their future. Because they have no chance in the future for trying and practice.
In conclusion, deciding about anything can be fearful at first. It is crucial to let people decide some wrong decisions to bring some good in the future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, even so, for instance, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1804.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 370.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87567567568 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55406978402 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551351351351 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.2119950848 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.1666666667 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4166666667 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 3.85842293907 415% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170793076166 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499849058987 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046453661155 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0974307111873 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0249776030685 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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