It’s more important to keep you old friends than it is to make new friends . Do you agree or disagree
Surrounding yourself with good friends is one of the blessings in life. They make life valuable, where they can be your support system and safe haven when life hits you hard. By their existence, friends can solve life's obstacles. As they say, a friend in need is a friend indeed.
And while many people prefer to keep their old friends, in my opinion, I believe that having new friends is Essential. I feel this for several reasons.
To begin with, every person goes through different phases in life. During this transition, the character itself might change. For example, the criteria of choosing friends differ from age to age, so what you be looking for in a friend will not be the same from childhood to adulthood. In addition, life takes people to different places according to their career. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. After graduating from dental school and working as a dentist, I found that all the people around me are only from the medical field. It was an absolute coincidence, and it was not intentional to be in a specific circle. But life takes you to situations and individuals you never thought of being with. Last but not least, making new friendships means that you have excellent communication skills and the ability to adapt doubtlessly to society. For instance, I always travel worldwide to attend international conferences and keep myself updated with new courses as part of my job. During all my travels I always meet new people with different cultures and thankfully I enjoy it. I can blend in effortlessly within no time. Unlike my friend Maha, who suffers during traveling because she does not like to know new friends, she encloses herself with the old mates,
to sum up, its extremely important to make new friends, at the same time it does not mean to end the relationship with the old ones. What always matters is to have real friends who are truly faithful and loving, regardless of who you are. So choose them wisely and put in mind the concept of accepting new friends.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 140, Rule ID: SAFE_HAVEN[1]
Message: Use simply 'haven'.
Suggestion: haven
...ere they can be your support system and safe haven when life hits you hard. By their exist...
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Line 2, column 74, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...keep their old friends, in my opinion, I believe that having new friends is Essen...
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Line 3, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is for several reasons. To begin with, every person goes through different phas...
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Line 3, column 500, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
... working as a dentist, I found that all the people around me are only from the medical field. It was...
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Line 3, column 754, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'friendships'' or 'friendship's'?
Suggestion: friendships'; friendship's
...ng with. Last but not least, making new friendships means that you have excellent communica...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 353.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76487252125 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60885445133 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580736543909 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.2575169001 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0952380952 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8095238095 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38095238095 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281080857598 0.236089414692 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737830364443 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071304666826 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182172244905 0.150856017488 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0160838507739 0.0645574589148 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 10.002688172 45% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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