keeping old friends is more important than making new friends.
do you agree or disagree
While it is important to keep our old friends, I nevertheless partly disagree with the statement. In fact, I hold to the idea that it is crucial to have new friends as well for the following reasons.
Firstly, there is no denying that old friends have a quality that is unique and rare. This uniqueness is that they know you the best and lived with you most of your experiences since you were young. Also, they witnessed your different change phases from childhood till this moment. However, making new friends at different age phases is beneficial for our self-development and confidence-boosting. Because socialization by meeting diverse types of people is an opportunity for learning and having different perspectives of life. For instance, there is a colleague at my job who became my friend this year. She helped me with a work issue, and I learned a lot from her how to handle work problems because she is more experienced than me. Thus, old friends understand what I go through at any time of my life and comfort me. On the other hand, new friends continuously help me evolve and progress as a person.
Furthermore, people change homes from time to time for various reasons, and they leave to another city or a state. Seemingly, Connections with old friends in their hometown became less than they used to be. Therefore, meeting new people and having new friends is unavoidable. Because by human nature we are certainly happier when we socialize. For example, I had to move to another city when I got married and I felt lonely when I got there. However, my sweet neighbor invited me to a welcome party at her house which I attended. Surprisingly, I had so much fun at the party and got the chance to know other people in my neighborhood who became my best friends as well. That’s why surrounding ourselves with good new people helps us go through our lonely times away from our hometown.
Lastly, socialization is the heart of civilization. It is the process by which social beings establish wider and more profound relationships with others to broaden their perspectives and improve their personalities. Eventually creating a complex structure of a progressing civilization. Therefore, making new friends is a basic asset for society to stay stable and grow healthy.
To sum it up, socialization in the form of meeting various people, befriending them, and being surrounded by them is a dominant need for one’s development as well as the society as a whole.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 276, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... and having new friends is unavoidable. Because by human nature we are certainly happie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, lastly, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in fact, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2054.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 422.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8672985782 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98720721269 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523696682464 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 631.8 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4168877092 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5833333333 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5833333333 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.04166666667 5.45110844103 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269258063304 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750812314453 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734418915079 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142802886543 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0896522771116 0.0645574589148 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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