I believed that in life we have to faces many problems.life is not going good or beautiful as we thought.WE have to face many problems.Sometime we have to take help from different people to solve the problem mostly we take help from our friends. good friend are .always ready to help us in any situation but in the case of renting from a friend can ham or dame in our friendship not every one can gave money to their friend.
In our life money is a very important to us.We have to do many struggle to earn money.We cannot easily trust the people to gave money to them because there is a risk to gave your money to someone.some people do not return the money in time.Some friends are disappear after taking the money and they do not contact us .financing someone is very difficult to us.Many friend get separated because of money issue.In our life time we have to fight for many problems one of them is money .Most of the people are suffering from this problem.In every steps people have to borrow money from friend .people cannot afford money when they need at last they have to borrow with friend but not every friend manage to gave the money in that situation somehow their friendship can damage.
I saw a many fight which is doing for money.Last time when i used to live in a hostel one of my friend borrow a money with her best friend and she promised her to give money in time but she is not able to give her money in time and they do some discuss but at last their discuss turn into fight and now both best friend are not taking with each other because of money.Money affect their good friendship.I saw more many fight with friend because of money.In my experience i think borrowing money from a friend is not a very good idea.
But if we can able to gave money in time,if our friend trust us i do not think their is a problem in our friendship.friendship is all about trust.So the friend who can not trust each other they can broke their friendship.Not every one but most of the friend damage their friend ship by borrowing money from a friend.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1675.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 383.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37336814621 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47293153034 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.394255874674 0.524837075471 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 530.1 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 76.0 20.1344086022 377% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 217.40137994 48.9658058833 444% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 335.0 100.406767564 334% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 76.6 20.6045352989 372% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 35.0 5.5376344086 632% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249696651751 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163569378577 0.076458572812 214% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646632894477 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180958284288 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383059593657 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.5 11.7677419355 319% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 11.26 58.1214874552 19% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 30.6 10.1575268817 301% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.25 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 86.8835125448 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 10.002688172 170% => OK
gunning_fog: 32.4 10.0537634409 322% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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