These days, many schools require students to take all subjects. Many people say this policy is difficult for students. However, I think this policy is very helpful to students, so I agree with this policy. I will tell you three reasons to support my opinion.
First, learning various subjects helps students find their dreams. Many students find it difficult to search for a dream. It is because there aren't many ways to experience it. Therefore, learning various subjects is the only way for students to find their aptitude. For example, my friend had too many dreams before, so it is very hard to choose, but through one biology class, she decided to become a biologist. This is why the various subjects are necessary for students.
Second, learning various subjects is a privilege to students. It is a great thing to be able to learn various subjects. By learning many subjects, knowledge builds up in many fields and the view of the world widens. Therefore, if you learn diverse subjects in your school days, it will be a great help in many ways. For example, my mom’s friend is a doctor, and she learned Chinese when she was young, so she was able to guide a Chinese VIP guest very skillfully.
Last, learning various subjects is also helpful when meeting various people. There are many people in the world who work in various fields. We often have to make friends with these diverse people and work together. In this situation, various subjects that we learned in the past help us communicate and understand each other.
This is why I agree to study many subjects in school. I want to experience and challenge more diverse subjects than now. Also, I hope more people feel that these subjects are helpful in life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 299.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78260869565 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43385443001 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491638795987 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.9 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.4390383659 48.9658058833 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.0 100.406767564 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5909090909 20.6045352989 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36363636364 5.45110844103 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249940867797 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854691255292 0.076458572812 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628089634471 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147947350821 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0894950226724 0.0645574589148 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 11.7677419355 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 58.1214874552 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.5 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 86.8835125448 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 10.002688172 45% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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