There is a good benefit if we spend time with our friends rather than being alone. However, I’m opposite. I prefer to spend my time alone. I have two reasons in this essay.
First, friend can be a bad factor to concentrate on our study. Imagine that your friend come to your home. Can you concentrate on your study? You cannot.
For example, today, my friend came to my house. The original plan was to study with my friend, but we did not. Because we are friends. Nobody can concentrate on their study when they meet a friend.
Second, after I start to play with my friend, we cannot end the game and fun. Despite you try to study, it’s not easy. For instance, when I met my friend in cafeteria to do homework, we start to talk, and to chat, however, we could not finish our conversation. We were already addicted. It is human’s instinct.
In conclusion, having friend is good being alone is better. So we can study more and concentrate. Futhermore, if we are with friends we cannot do important things because we spend time mostly on talking and playing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 112, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...o study with my friend, but we did not. Because we are friends. Nobody can concentrate ...
Line 5, column 199, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
...on their study when they meet a friend. Second, after I start to play with my fr...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 52.1666666667 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 883.0 1977.66487455 45% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 193.0 407.700716846 47% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57512953368 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 4.48103885553 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47074754111 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 212.727598566 53% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585492227979 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 618.680645161 43% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 20.1344086022 50% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8589077026 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 46.4736842105 100.406767564 46% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.1578947368 20.6045352989 49% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.42105263158 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304508545097 0.236089414692 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905662545898 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0885674231366 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184553085122 0.150856017488 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0844700565369 0.0645574589148 131% => OK
automated_readability_index: 5.2 11.7677419355 44% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.25 58.1214874552 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 10.1575268817 47% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.8 10.9000537634 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 86.8835125448 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 3.5 10.002688172 35% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.0537634409 60% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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