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In today's progressive and sophisticated world we live, no one can turn a blind eye to the importance of social skills and academic qualifications at work. Some people may depend on their skills while on the other end of the rope, others prefer to use their academic qualifications to achieve their goals. From my perspective, social skill looks more rational and I will elaborate on my point of view in the following article cogently.
the first exquisite point to be mentioned is the ability to communicate with others professionally to achieve good standing results. In another word, have a good attitude to deal with your manager and colleagues in a friendly, cooperative way. I can use a personal experience to illustrate that when I arrived in the United State in 2014, I started to look for a job as a dental assistant. After a long story of a search for a job, I finally started to work in one of the private dental clinics in Houston. At the beginning, I did not know how to do some difficult tasks which may give a negative impression between other workers, but because I was friendly and nice to them, they all tried to help me and allow me to learn a new staff and be equivalent to them. After five years, I can tell that now I am a professional dental assistant and have a very good relationship with the manager and the workers as well.
Another equally noteworthy point in corroborating this issue is experience. When you apply for a new job, you may not have a good chance to be enrolled in this job because they need experience in addition to your degree or certificate. In any branch of knowledge, if you do not have an experience, that means your degree is not valuable. As an example, when I applied for a job vacancy as a dental assistant, even if I have a bachelor's degree in dentistry outside the State, but they asked for years of experience in the State to be eligible for their requirements. Therefore, I took my online courses as a registered dental assistant in the Texas board and my CPR ( first aid course) and I asked them to make a shadowing with them before hiring me. All these issues clearly explain what they need besides my academic qualifications.
To wrap it up, all the after-mentioned points lead us to the conclusion that, in addition to the academic degree, many important aspects should be available in your resume to have a good opportunity to be enrolled in any job. The most worthy and valuable point is social skills and how to deal with others in a friendly and respectful way. Otherwise, no one wants to hire a trouble maker employee
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, first, if, look, may, so, therefore, well, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2126.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 463.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59179265659 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63868890866 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86097629455 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503239740821 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 692.1 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.0763921301 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.111111111 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7222222222 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155138208624 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050603390855 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.087172806972 0.0737576698707 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0934163348943 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583256008313 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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