reasons of why people need to work
In today’s progressive and sophisticated world where we live, no one can turn a blind eye to the significant effect of work. In this regard, many points could be suggested as the work’s advantages. I will elaborate on my point of view in the following article cogently.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is self-confidence. Work could be considered as one of the most powerful aspects to support the individual personality, in another word, make him/her more strength and confidence in addition to the ability to resolve problems smartly. To illustrate, I can mention my personal experience to explain this issue. I am an oversea dentist, arrived in the United State in July 2014. For the first six months, I was so shy and afraid to talk or deal with the community even if they are so nice but I feel like I am different. In spite of this negative feeling, I pushed myself to work as a dental assistant in one of the numerous clinics in our neighborhood. After five years I can tell that I am different, I am more confident in myself and more independent
Another equally noteworthy point in corroborating this issue is making new friends and new connections which in turn may return in more benefit because it may provide you with a good opportunity in jobs. However, to be continued from the previous experience of mine, After I began to work with this clinic, I make new friends. Some of them were the patients and others my colleagues. Fortunately, they helped me to obtain one of the precious valuable and wonderful chances in my life to work with one of the most prestigious clinics in Texas with a higher salary.
Finally, new researches and survey readings explain that working mothers could be more helpful to their kids. They found that more than 70% of the children with employing mothers enjoy the more achievable environment and they are more self-independent that kids with home mothers.
To wrap it up, all the after-mentioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that work is so important. There are uncountable benefits of work but to summarize it we can mention that work help people be more self- confident, making new friends, and to raise healthy children.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, may, so, i feel, in addition, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1837.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85978835979 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94720512157 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.0388074384 48.9658058833 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.058823529 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2352941176 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41176470588 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125430556724 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439218078325 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520199858871 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0854842581441 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734810022731 0.0645574589148 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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