There is no shortage of debate whether movies are popular or not. In my opinion, I firmly believe that human beings need entertainment in their life that can be provided by film. The reasons of watching film are: to gain knowledge, able to do conversation with international people, and helps to find job. I feel this way for the several reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, movies are source of information which advocates all the people in the world. It is very imperative for gainng a knowlede. My own experience is a compelling example of this. When I was in high school, I used watch-science fiction- movie. That movie was based on the priciple of garvitational force: which has helped me to think in different ways. I used to imagine about the universe and tried to find out the finding and discovery. As a result, this movie has motivated me to study science. I was admired by watching that movie and finally decide to shape my career as scientist. However, I was in confusion about my gaol before watching that movie.
Secondly, I considered movie like the university because people attend univeristy to gain knowledge. Movie is another source of knowlede; as it shows very important information. For example, when I watched a movie: Histroy of Nepal. It provides background informtion of Nepal whic I had also studied in my course. I enjoy and gain knowlede by watching movie; although, I had not cared in the class. There different method of learning among them watching movie is one of the best way.
Finally, as the movie are presented in different languages, which would also help to comprehend various languages. For instance, I used to watch Korean movie, when I was at high school. By watching these movie I was able to do conversation in Korean languag. Now i have job in travel agency; I take Korean tourist to different parts of our country. Consequently, I am doing that job and being financially strong. If hadn't watched Korean movie, I wouldn't have been involved in this job. So, I feel that watching movie can benefits to all the people.
To sum up, watching movie is worth to all the people this is because it helps in academic career, Provides fun, and makes finacially strong. Therfore, the best way to enhance our lfe is to watch movies.
There is no shortage of debate whether movies are popular or not. In my opinion, I firmly believe that human beings need entertainment in their life that can be provided by film. The reasons of watching film are: to gain knowledge, able to do conversation with international people, and helps to find job. I feel this way for the several reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, movies are source of information which advocates all the people in the world. It is very imperative for gainng a knowlede. My own experience is a compelling example of this. When I was in high school, I used watch-science fiction- movie. That movie was based on the priciple of garvitational force: which has helped me to think in different ways. I used to imagine about the universe and tried to find out the finding and discovery. As a result, this movie has motivated me to study science. I was admired by watching that movie and finally decide to shape my career as scientist. However, I was in confusion about my gaol before watching that movie.
Secondly, I considered movie like the university because people attend univeristy to gain knowledge. Movie is another source of knowlede; as it shows very important information. For example, when I watched a movie: Histroy of Nepal. It provides background informtion of Nepal whic I had also studied in my course. I enjoy and gain knowlede by watching movie; although, I had not cared in the class. There different method of learning among them watching movie is one of the best way.
Finally, as the movie are presented in different languages, which would also help to comprehend various languages. For instance, I used to watch Korean movie, when I was at high school. By watching these movie I was able to do conversation in Korean languag. Now i have job in travel agency; I take Korean tourist to different parts of our country. Consequently, I am doing that job and being financially strong. If hadn't watched Korean movie, I wouldn't have been involved in this job. So, I feel that watching movie can benefits to all the people.
To sum up, watching movie is worth to all the people this is because it helps in academic career, Provides fun, and makes finacially strong. Therfore, the best way to enhance our lfe is to watch movies.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 198, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this movie' or 'these movies'?
Suggestion: this movie; these movies
... when I was at high school. By watching these movie I was able to do conversation in Korean...
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Line 4, column 270, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'jobbed'.
Suggestion: jobbed
...versation in Korean languag. Now i have job in travel agency; I take Korean tourist...
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Line 4, column 416, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: hadn't
...at job and being financially strong. If hadnt watched Korean movie, I wouldnt have be...
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Line 4, column 446, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...trong. If hadnt watched Korean movie, I wouldnt have been involved in this job. So, I f...
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Line 4, column 521, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'benefit'
Suggestion: benefit
...job. So, I feel that watching movie can benefits to all the people. To sum up, watchin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, i feel, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1901.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 401.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74064837905 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73096139407 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531172069825 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.8628341129 48.9658058833 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.8928571429 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3214285714 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.39285714286 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341108317675 0.236089414692 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853143843729 0.076458572812 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123691056632 0.0737576698707 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21520188174 0.150856017488 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.222484395449 0.0645574589148 345% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.62 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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